Sadness

eyes flow with water emotional wave surges two palms are now wet 8/31/17 contest Senryu on Sadness

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2017 1:33:00 PM

Sad, emotional and beautiful, Frederic. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2017 8:56:00 PM

Big congrats on your win, Frederic

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/3/2017 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations Frederic :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2017 11:51:00 AM

-Hello again, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2017 5:38:00 PM

That last line was perfect for this one, Frederic. WELL done.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/31/2017 6:59:00 PM

This is very good. Great description!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2017 3:04:00 PM

i can imagine the angst, frederick--- when two palms are cupped together, this image projects deep torment... a beauty, this one.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2017 2:36:00 PM

- Sounds like a deep sadness, excellent written Frederic - Lovely new photo ... grandchildren? - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2017 2:39:00 PM

yes, one of my beautiful grand-daughters