Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Sad Violin -

No one can see it,
but it is there
Dark and cold ... as wet thick fog
The thoughts go crazy
A sad melody replay
Fight with a sword, vision failed

Drowning in mournful tears
Kills the inside of the chest
With fear of death lullaby
Always fighting, demon of the deadly sins
Give the crying heart something to live for









19.03.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Gary Bateman April 15, 2017 at 2:44 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! Best Easter Holiday Wishes from Ingrid and me. My original earlier comments below on "Sad Violin" still apply, of course, on this marvelous free verse write. It's indeed a very well-rendered verse with its aura of distinct sadness and emotion. I'm very pleased to see it made the "Best New Poems List." Again, Blessed Easter Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Cheers, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2017 at 12:55 PM - Always nice to see you, Gary :) - Best wishes to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso April 13, 2017 at 6:51 PM Sad and lonely poem, and very very pretty. Nicely done, Sunshine, ,,,Fran Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2017 at 8:06 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Francis :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Doug Vinson April 11, 2017 at 11:32 PM Ah yes, Anne-Lise, I can hear that piercing sound.... Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2017 at 11:04 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Doug :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock March 30, 2017 at 11:35 AM The picture and your words bring about a sad feeling. Well written. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2017 at 12:34 PM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman March 28, 2017 at 10:24 AM Dear Anne-Lise, This one's an instant FAV for me!! The words in your verses, against the backdrop of the sad lady playing the violin, amplify the raw emotion and sadness of the situation you're describing. Every verse in your write gives the reader a palpable image to cling to. A magnificent write for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2017 at 3:09 AM - Thanks Gary, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel March 26, 2017 at 9:03 AM Painfully sad, Anne-lise, but the melody is well brought out:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:09 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2017 at 9:29 AM Deliciously dark! Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:07 AM - Thanks Richard, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci March 21, 2017 at 3:38 AM Hello Anne. Good Morning. Usually no one can see. You have described this quiet pain perfectly. And yes also perfect is the sad violin to fit the mood and situation. Well done and understandable. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:08 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball March 21, 2017 at 12:59 AM Absolutely beautiful Anne. A very poignant piece and the pic is great. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:08 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian March 20, 2017 at 5:37 PM Sunshine...the depth of emotion and struggle are clearly transmitted to the reader. We all need something to live for....and conversely...something to die for. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:08 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 20, 2017 at 4:06 PM A dark write Anne... and an inspiring image.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:06 AM - Thanks Joseph, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 20, 2017 at 1:37 PM ohh, anne... deep, dark but very inspiring... you shine with this superb work!..happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:07 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 8:54 AM Your words speak in a melancholy abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought, like the crying strings of a sad violin, Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:04 AM - Thanks Emile, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong March 20, 2017 at 6:10 AM Music always seems to soothe the troubled soul Anne-Lise. Lovely, though sad. 7 ; Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2017 at 11:04 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams March 20, 2017 at 3:57 AM Beautiful imagery, beautiful words Anne-Lise. I can hear the violin, the sad sweet notes, I grew up hearing my dad play, and it was wonderful. A big 7+ Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:35 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan March 20, 2017 at 1:01 AM so dark and deep but beautiful... Loved the last line... Brilliantly done Anne... Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:34 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 19, 2017 at 7:20 PM Gloomy melancholic masterpiece dear, Anne-Lise! A seven and hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:32 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie March 19, 2017 at 4:50 PM The anguish comes alive with terrific imagery and despair filled notes in this haunting piece. Exceptional writing Anne-Lise :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:28 AM - Thanks Lynn, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso March 19, 2017 at 4:22 PM I love this, the poem so dark, and with the photo, I imagine the sadness of the violin playing! Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:31 AM - Thank you very much, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith March 19, 2017 at 4:18 PM I can hear the sadness in every note...you relayed that feeling well Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 5:30 AM - Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)