Sad Skies

somber skies like downcast eyes your tears overflow my cupped hands

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/23/2019 12:53:00 PM

So descriptive and very sad my friend, Great write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 8:59:00 PM

thank you so much my friend.... hugs

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2019 8:07:00 AM

heartbreaking short poem...

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 12:25:00 PM

depending on how you look at it i guess it can be...i was thinking along the lines of catching other's tears but i can see it as catching one's own in cupped hands... hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/23/2019 7:24:00 AM

In eleven words you seized my heart.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 12:23:00 PM

thank you so much Caren :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2019 11:11:00 PM

This is a beauty. Love it. God bless you sweet lady, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina :) hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/22/2019 5:24:00 PM

You have revealed the kindness in your soul with this one dear poet

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 6:40:00 PM

thank you so much Frederic....guess it's hard to hide sometimes ...

Ann Foster

Date: 11/22/2019 3:59:00 PM

That was lovely. A fav and committed I hope to memory...soon. God Bless your day. Flowers, bright and beautiful, here and there... surprises you never thought... prayers for you... You are an excellent poetess. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 4:05:00 PM

Sometimes we don’t know why our muse pens what it does when it does but when the words touch someone you begin to understand. Thank you so much my friend for the fave and kind words :). Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2019 2:46:00 PM

- Drops like beautiful pearls ... catch them if you can, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope your weekend is as beautiful as your words ... I’m trying to catch them all :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2019 2:44:00 PM

Your heart glows in this one Sandy. We'd all love to have someone catch our tears when they fall, at least I would. Your kindness is unending.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Chris... some of us are used to catching others tears. Always there for those that are important to me sometimes even strangers like that abused woman I once helped ... hugs