Sad Shades of Blue

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The ocean reflected by azure skies
glistens in deeper salubrious shades
enchanting me in a mesmerizing gaze
as the waves heave high and low,
undulating currents courses
distilled into my blue eyes,
giving them a blue sea shade.
 
A windswept chill recalls many
cold blue lips of drowned bodies
on ships and vessels wrecked at sea.
Blue songs sung to mourn their loss.
Somber souls in sorrow coping,
hoping to lay their loved ones to rest.
 
Cobalt blue on stained glass windows
in the consecrated Christ’s cathedral
illuminates its mourners in shards of blue.
Officers in blue livery offer reverent respect
at gravesites with flowers in hues of blue.
As twilight’s victory overtakes the sun
shadows fall in somber shades of blue.
 
2-28-16

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*Note: My Granddaughter Carissa, soon to be four, 
gave this poem its name after I read it to her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/10/2016 8:31:00 PM
Yes, I had seen this one after all!! Was rechecking to make sure I had commented on it before. And congrats AGAIN.
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Date: 4/12/2016 1:17:00 AM
Awesome imagery, sterling flow, and a haunting message that causes one to look upon the sea in a different--and sobering--dimension. Magnificently conceptualized and composed, Connie. hugs x x x
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:00:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul. I really appreciate your generous insightful comment. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 3/10/2016 6:19:00 PM
Connie, back to say CONGRATULATIONS ~
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/11/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Constance. I just can't keep up when so many contests close at once. I know everyone has that problem. Thank you! ; )
Date: 3/9/2016 8:14:00 PM
shards, hues, and shade.... sounds like a life. love this poem Connie.
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Date: 3/9/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Lewis. ; )
Date: 3/7/2016 7:37:00 AM
Awesome win, Connie....Linda
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/9/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Linda. ;)
Date: 3/4/2016 10:10:00 AM
A nice one Connie and wonderful that you had help naming the poem. They are so expressive at that age. love phyl
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Phyl. We have a lot of fun together. ; )
Date: 3/2/2016 4:33:00 PM
This is wonderful poetry Connie. Congratulations,
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Harry. ; )
Date: 3/2/2016 7:55:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive and so lovely, Connie. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2016 4:05:00 AM
Thank you vey much Sandra. ; )
Date: 3/1/2016 9:19:00 PM
Connie , this is a very beautifully blue poem. I can see all of the things you mention. Soldiers in blue,(my son was in the navy) Stained glass mourners, the sea, the sky all very vivid shades of blue. You have left me feeling blue but fret not I am used to it as it is my best friend. He visits often. Peace dear lady:)
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:51:00 PM
Connie, perfect for the contest! Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/1/2016 9:16:00 AM
This is extremely good writing and descriptive. Congratulations, Connie.
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Date: 3/1/2016 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful write Connie. I've seen so many shades of blue in the ocean many of which reside in my emotions. Cute comment about Carissa.
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:54:00 AM
i love this, connie, and i think it's one of the best poems of yours that i've seen so far; you really felt this one, envisaged it - congrats on your contest win, and thanks for being such a staunch commentator on my work, though i'm a bit remiss in returning comments sometimes!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2016 7:47:00 PM
I really appreciate your generous comment, coming from such a talent poet as yourself. Mahalo Nui Loa my friend. ; )
Date: 3/1/2016 4:40:00 AM
I knew this would top the winners list, Connie. Many congrats. Elaine
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Date: 3/5/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, thank you my friend for having such faith in my work. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 2/29/2016 3:54:00 PM
I like the colour blue, Connie; I find it calming. I'm told it matches my eyes (which are not blue). There are moments when I see blue the way you describe it here....sad, but it all depends on the mood. This poem is beautiful and skillfully tackled. #7 ~ regards // paul
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Date: 2/29/2016 3:51:00 PM
Yes, Connie. I finished my blue poem. I see right at this moment you are getting congrats in his contest. He must be judging it at this very moment. Have got to go see how we did. BIG congrats, dearie.
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Date: 2/29/2016 4:03:00 PM
We both got a placement of 3 Andrea which makes me happy to be in your company and the others as well. There were some really wonderful entries. Thanks, Connie ; )
Date: 2/29/2016 3:10:00 PM
There's that old song, Blue Heaven, which is so beautiful it makes me cry blue tears. "As twilight's victory overtakes the sun?" that's great! Love, daver
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:24:00 PM
This is just so beautiful!! The idea is so unique.. The title is wonderful too!! Hope this does really well in the contest!! :D :D
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:20:00 PM
majestic kind of blue tinted with shades of melancholy...very creatively designed, connie!.. a sure bet for me..huggs
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Date: 2/28/2016 7:15:00 PM
Well Connie from a guy that worKS on the sea I can tell you I have been there, seen co workers pass and the ensuing funerals and your imagery here is perfect in describing it all. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Carl
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:23:00 PM
Wow, your comment is an honor Carl and I appreciate it very much. Thank you my friend! ; )
Date: 2/28/2016 6:40:00 PM
wow, connie, I love how you focused your theme on the SAD things of blue. I also did three stanzas but put focus on natures calming blues. (not posted yet) Anyway, I really think you did a good job . Hurrah for a new post like this one.
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:54:00 PM
You don t think it is too morose? Thank you for your encouraging words Andrea. I can't wait to read yours. His contest is filling up fast so you better hurry. Hugs, Connie ; )
Date: 2/28/2016 5:20:00 PM
This is powerful with the theme artfully woven throughout, never sounding contrived. Wish I could have written it, but I can't say I'm blue with envy.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/28/2016 6:50:00 PM
You are too kind Mark. I really appreciate your imput. Thank you very much! ; )
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:48:00 PM
When some one is commenting the same time you are leaving a comment the message jumps up to the person ahead. Sorry....
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/28/2016 6:41:00 PM
How nice of you Elaine. Thank you very much. ; ) xx
Date: 2/28/2016 5:11:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Connie. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:44:00 PM
How nice of you Elaine. Thank you very much. ; ) xx
Date: 2/28/2016 4:44:00 PM
Connie, this poem is so beautifully penned, wonderful for the blue contest, a winner to me, I love it ~
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/28/2016 6:37:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much Constance. I was thinking maybe it is too somber. So glad you like it. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 2/28/2016 3:01:00 PM
Carissa did a wonderful job and so did you. A lot of thought went into this (not that we don't always think when writing) informative, thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it and wish you all the best in the contest and everything else ... CayCay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/28/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you very much for your insightful nice comments CayCay. Carissa thanks you too! ; )
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