Sacred Waters

Water was sacred
either as a shower
squirted out of a sprinkler 
on the backyard lawn
to run through and cool us
on hot summer days
or splashed from a font
when making the sign 
of the cross as we entered
St Mary's for Sunday mass.

It was more so
when held within the banks 
of the Port Adelaide River, 
its tidal flow a pulse 
that pumped through 
the city's very heart.
It was my Jordan and Ganges 
though in grandeur and size,
its upper reaches was little 
more than a creek clogged 
with mangroves and mud.
Its main channel was dredged
and widened for ships.

The river nurtured me, 
fed my appetite for myth 
and wonder and carried 
my history in its dark, 
oily flow. I both loved 
and loathed it for holding
me to a mortgage.
It took a lifetime to pay off.
I still long to go back 
and stand on its banks, 
bathe my feet in its waters -
make peace - return 
one more time to what 
was once my home.
Though now,
I doubt I will ever see 
the Port River again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 4:41 AM
Lovely write! I remember washing my daughters’ hair with the hose and strawberry shampoo, once for fun. Something about being outside with a lovely scent and nature, a moment in time. Thank you for sharing your moment, close to the heart!
Willason Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 2:05 PM
Hi Kim, So pleased the poem triggered some treasured recollections in your life. Very much appreciate your comments, always good to know when something in a poem connects. Take care,
M  Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 2:29 AM
What a journey that was Paul….l understood it, felt it and enjoyed it! I like it when you write about your childhood. You should put your poems into a book….l am sure it would be big seller….anyway enough compliments for you today hehe…Debx
Willason Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Honored that you jumped into the poem Deb...that it had meaning. Childhood is always rich source of material for poetry, its where the first flame was ignited in our imagination. Always enjoy being bathed in your compliments my friend... Take care
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