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Sacred Sunset Haiku

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10/5/2023 egg yolk of a sun with peace, settles in the West first blue star, just winks

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2023 12:52:00 PM

Wow! Both the poem and accompanying visual truly appeal to me, Pangie. It's about time I faved this! ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/6/2023 5:19:00 PM

I just saw this! My daughter is scooping me up off the floor, Paul, after seeing your fave! I am truly and deeply honored and touched. It’s like receiving an honor from a Zen Master! Like you, I loved that image and felt it appropriate to th the flow of the Haiku. Merci beaucoup~ Pangie xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2023 9:36:00 AM

Great comparison of colour. Blessings.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/6/2023 10:27:00 AM

Greetings from a sunny morning in California ,Victor. Finding good in people and there,is a fantastic art that you have.You are an inspiration! Your poetry as I told you is phenomenal.. Gracias…Pangie

Karen Jones

Date: 10/5/2023 11:07:00 PM

This is gorgeous. Love the idea of egg yolk. So cool

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/6/2023 10:18:00 AM

Karen, my best wishes for a good day. I never thought the egg yolk would be liked!! But that is how it looks sometimes. Merci,, pabgie

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/5/2023 9:12:00 PM

Now that's poetry my sister poet!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/6/2023 10:12:00 AM

Ayana~ thank you! And you are. a sunrise poer, who shines your light on truth and beauty, tou are a unique poet. You and others on this page, keep the fire of poetry in me, aglow. Pangie xx

David Fisher

Date: 10/5/2023 4:39:00 PM

So sweet. I could picture that star winking at you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2023 5:27:00 PM

David! You and I see Ster Winky,))) Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/5/2023 2:44:00 PM

A lovely Haiku write/pretty picture. You told a story in a few words. Have a wonderful day..............

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hey, Paula. I think you condensed it well.” A story in a nutshell. Hope you are doing well. Don’t overdo it!-)) Pangie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/5/2023 2:25:00 PM

what a beautiful Haiku, Pangie. I can so identify with 'egg yolk of a sun.' Now when I see sunset I'll think of your saying and think of you. The last line was perfect as well. Well done, Ms. Pangie. Am faving this one...have a pleasant evening, Sara

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2023 3:21:00 PM

Good afternoon from California . I am so honored that you faved this, dear Sara. It was in a contest on another site. As you know, I stay out of contests here. I knew I-would not win. Haiku, is not my specialty. Nor Monokus.I studied philosophy of the Western World..so it’s beyond me to think I can be as wise Aristotle in one sentence.)) Not a chance! Like you, I loved the last line! Merci! Pangie

John Lawless

Date: 10/5/2023 1:14:00 PM

..."egg yolk of a sun"...Love that line Pangie.....simple, yet utterly(no pun intended) captivating.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2023 3:08:00 PM

You know, John, I thought, like you, it. was great! I had second thoughts and thought, oh, no, they will think I am balmy -)). I live in Ca and have seen the sun look like that.I am so appreciative of you, John. A most welcomed comment, to a very humble Haiku. Pangie xxx