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Sacred Rivers

Allow me to bathe in your rivers and young once again be! Do it now,before my feet alight on heavenly shores. And my eyes open in eternity. Just one more chance, to be able to dance. Or run in a marathon, the glory, that breathless joy. I, like a deer, in running prance. Allow me to bathe in your rivers and young once again be. I have loved and lived my life to the fullest. Magnificent rivers of the world, I beg of thee, Welcome and heal me! 3/10/2010 ~2~

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Date: 3/10/2021 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful, Pangie! Now this is real poetry! Bob
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 5:11:00 PM
ANAZING...THANKS PANGIE.
Date: 3/10/2021 11:37:00 AM
magical write, Panagiota. :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 11:58:00 AM
PS....how sweet to hear that from you. Hugs Pangie xx
Date: 3/10/2021 11:24:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, water is healing for the soul, and the mind. the water is calming. Hugs Darlene xx. i wrote a poem WHEN I AWAKE.. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 11:56:00 AM
Water is beautiful, Darlene... Calming? Very, Will look up your Poem Hugs Pangie xx
Date: 3/10/2021 11:17:00 AM
The cleansing and healing power of water that relaxes the mind and soul. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 12:12:00 PM
This is my second reply Thank you Pangie
Date: 3/10/2021 10:44:00 AM
You are so deerlike, lithe and lively!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 11:48:00 AM
Oh, Caren.....you made me smile....thank you. The deer, Panagiota xx

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