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Sacred Moments

Sacred moments remain with our CONNECTION- Freedom without disdain, loving AFFECTION. Inside twilit OCEANS you bring honest fire- Brimming tender NOTIONS filled with pure desire. Within sincere ardor, you teach me to FEEL- secrets ourselves adore, your flame makes me HEAL. Divine moments REMAIN with inner beauty- Without adhered REFRAIN... my sacred duty. 88 Syllables Poetry Contest Sponsor Joseph May February 18, 2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 7:58:00 PM

Beautifully done, Laura. Congrats on a most deserving win.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2018 10:32:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your poem, Laura , and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/15/2018 9:54:00 PM

Excellent flow and a gorgeous write - enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Luloo - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2018 6:54:00 PM

A lovely inspirational poem Laura! I found this form a challenge but you make it seem easy! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/14/2018 4:22:00 PM

This is very beautifully done, LauraLoo. I've read so many wonderful entries for this contest that it must have been horrible to judge. Congratulations for your win

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/23/2018 11:57:00 AM

Hi LL it is a beautiful poem no doubt with deep meaning . i am astonished to see no comments here.............. the last words i like most Divine moments REMAIN with inner beauty- Without adhered REFRAIN... my sacred duty.