Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Rhyme

Sacred Alter

“Teach me to pray,” I ask the Father.
He lovingly said, “Kneel down at my sacred alter”.
Looking around I could not see; where could this sacred alter be?
Then gently he instructed me his sacred alter was my knee.
In that moment it became the Holy of Holies.
Kneeling in humble prayer he assured me he would meet me there.
How sweetly he whispered, “Here you can always find me.
Here I will ever wait for thee, ever listening to hear your hearts plea.
It was with tear filled eyes that I finally understood that God’s alter is not made of 
Stone nor wood, but of a humble spirit and heart of love 



For Brian Strand's contest 
Any 2011 poem

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Walter Tomeo September 18, 2011 at 5:12 PM This is a wonderful poem Lori, I am enjoying reading your work, it is great! I also wanted to thank you for your kindness and welcome comments for "Whispering angel". Kindly, Walter

Judy Ball August 14, 2011 at 8:16 PM Excellent write filled with love and truth. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley August 11, 2011 at 10:45 AM Just beautiful Lori, it speaks volumes to me and touches deeply. So special.

Black Eyed Susan August 10, 2011 at 11:41 AM love your use of dialogue to tell this story, along with your character's thoughts, and the message you ultimately reveal. just beautiful.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 9, 2011 at 10:03 PM So heartfelt Lori...just beautiful... a pleasure to read!!!!!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire August 9, 2011 at 9:53 PM He is always there, waiting to listen to our prayers, Lori. A beautiful heartfelt poem about the "Sacred Altar" ofour Lord. Love, Carolyn