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Sabah Al-Khair

The sky unfolded
Strewn with color
From royal red to violet
As far as the eye could see
Standing upon the beach
Waves crashing, sinking into sand
Euphoria and delight fill my heart
Such exquisite music
Feeling pure and free
A refugee before the shining sea
Garbed in white
The sun peeks at me
A blushing sphere
My one true love
I hold my arms open
And the sun rises higher
The untold verses strech before me
Etched in the morning sky
Where I see colors fading to blue
No longer shall I live in fear
Tears fall from my eyes and I murmur,
"Sabah al-khair."

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2016 7:11:00 AM

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Fallen Antiquity
Date: 11/12/2016 12:20:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate the warm welcome!

Christy Stover

Date: 11/11/2016 8:36:00 PM

A wonderfully vivid and vibrant poem. Truly beautiful. You are a talented poet.

Fallen Antiquity
Date: 11/12/2016 12:19:00 PM

Thank you very much!