S For Shocking

society’s scars subversive subtlety--- soulless spirits seek © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 7:09:00 PM

A pointed view of what's wrong with society. The S's are used well in this! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 1:03:00 AM

Lots of S's!! Agood social commentary, Harry. YOu are one of my last to see tonight. Look at me here at 2 a.m in the rocky MOuntain zone. I am hopeless!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2011 4:31:00 PM

Another great one here Harry. An alliterative Senryu..Cool. And the message unfortunately is where it's at.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/3/2011 2:04:00 PM

true true true, enjoyed today Harry.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 11:05:00 AM

Excellent alliteration and a strong message too, Harry! My soulless spirit has become complacent to our suversive societies antics. This is a wakeup call! So nice to be back home, my friend. Love, Carolyn