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deep led to 'snoring' face-in-a-book, with thoughts so Memories of a

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/28/2019 6:16:00 PM

Hello William Kekaula, the sound of snoring does not n=bother me. it is when itstops then i would awake. have a nice evening my friend. Aloha Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/28/2019 6:40:00 PM

So true, Darlene, thanks for stopping by and sharing, Aloha wk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 8:15:00 PM

yep that will make ya snore all right. I enjoyed your different "angle" on this form!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/24/2019 8:18:00 PM

Yikes! Ughs, that it is Andrea, Aloha wk