Rusted Memories Decaying

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Ravaged and forgotten, I await my fate in this junkyard,
Under the fierce sun and pouring rain and snow . . . but,
Still within this rusted frame beats a soul and memories, and
There was a time when I was truly loved-
Every person admired my style and curves and my brilliance,
Death, oh   d e a t h   and old age is a terrible thing.

Memories are all I have as weeds and vines devour,
Even now, I can still feel the soft cloth that caressed,
Making sure my paint shined like glass . . .  and,
On long rolling highways and hills, I glided a thing of beauty-
Roaring along without a care in the world (I was young)
Inside my interior was impeccable and my leather so soft
Eternity was mine- I was going to exist forever, but
Silently, the rust began and soon ruined and scarred my beauty.

Days passed and then one day, I was towed to this lonely place,
Eternity seems like not such a good idea now . . .  
Chirping from within me where a little song bird has made a nest,
And windflowers and yellow dandelions keep me company.
Years have passed and more and more cars lay ravaged,
Inside my soul memories stir of happy times-
Now my windows have grown blank as dead eyes, and all the
Gnarled and twisted, rusting cars (once loved) wait  . . . d e c a y i n g.

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June 12, 2016

Poetry/Acrostic/Personification/Rusted Memories Decaying
Copyright Protected, ID 16-799-868-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Rusted and Busted
sponsor, Casarah Nance

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/29/2016 5:38:00 AM
Great job, I also enjoyed the Audio. Congrats Constance.
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Date: 6/29/2016 4:59:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/29/2016 2:55:00 AM
Congratulations on a superb win, Constance:)
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Date: 6/28/2016 3:45:00 AM
A great congrats on your superb win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/27/2016 5:41:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations you on your wonderful win! Wonderful write ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/27/2016 2:58:00 PM
Back to say congrats, Constance. I knew yours would be at the top! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/27/2016 2:13:00 PM
This was wonderful and sweet, Constance!! So happy to see that it placed high....well deserved !!:)
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:18:00 AM
Amazing write with so many catching lines like "Eternity was mine- I was going to exist forever, but Silently, the rust began and soon ruined and scarred my beauty." and "And windflowers and yellow dandelions keep me company." Wonderfully done and grats on a well deserved second place :)
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Date: 6/21/2016 5:07:00 AM
As amazing as Constance! Good Luck!
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Date: 6/14/2016 10:36:00 AM
An absolute amazing Acrostic, Constance, and your personification is very powerful and comprehensive as seen from the decaying car would it have a heart and soul! Love it - a 7 and Fav for me. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2016 9:56:00 AM
Very nicely done, Constance, great acrostic and personification, makes you feel sorry for the car, nice flow, hope it does well in contest. Looks like a winner to me! JDH
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Date: 6/13/2016 4:42:00 AM
Lol! You penned this great meaningful..... You personified it eloquent and brilliant; that is you my friend.........A.M.
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:04:00 PM
Your poem shows that words are more effective than paints and lights.... great job...
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Date: 6/12/2016 10:25:00 PM
Beautifully written, Broken Wings. It's a sureshit winner. Will be coming back to congratulate you for sure. ~karam~
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Karam Misra
Date: 6/12/2016 10:27:00 PM
*sureshot (awfully sorry for the autocorrect) ~karam~
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