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Rusted Memories Decaying

Ravaged and forgotten, I await my fate in this junkyard,
Under the fierce sun and pouring rain and snow . . . but,
Still within this rusted frame beats a soul and memories, and
There was a time when I was truly loved-
Every person admired my style and curves and my brilliance,
Death, oh   d e a t h   and old age is a terrible thing.

Memories are all I have as weeds and vines devour,
Even now, I can still feel the soft cloth that caressed,
Making sure my paint shined like glass . . .  and,
On long rolling highways and hills, I glided a thing of beauty-
Roaring along without a care in the world (I was young)
Inside my interior was impeccable and my leather so soft
Eternity was mine- I was going to exist forever, but
Silently, the rust began and soon ruined and scarred my beauty.

Days passed and then one day, I was towed to this lonely place,
Eternity seems like not such a good idea now . . .  
Chirping from within me where a little song bird has made a nest,
And windflowers and yellow dandelions keep me company.
Years have passed and more and more cars lay ravaged,
Inside my soul memories stir of happy times-
Now my windows have grown blank as dead eyes, and all the
Gnarled and twisted, rusting cars (once loved) wait  . . . d e c a y i n g.

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June 12, 2016

Poetry/Acrostic/Personification/Rusted Memories Decaying
Copyright Protected, ID 16-799-868-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Rusted and Busted
sponsor, Casarah Nance

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Great job, I also enjoyed the Audio. Congrats Constance.
Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 4:59 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:55 AM
Congratulations on a superb win, Constance:)
Devnath  Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 3:45 AM
A great congrats on your superb win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations you on your wonderful win! Wonderful write ! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Back to say congrats, Constance. I knew yours would be at the top! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 2:13 PM
This was wonderful and sweet, Constance!! So happy to see that it placed high....well deserved !!:)
Nance Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Amazing write with so many catching lines like "Eternity was mine- I was going to exist forever, but Silently, the rust began and soon ruined and scarred my beauty." and "And windflowers and yellow dandelions keep me company." Wonderfully done and grats on a well deserved second place :)
Cheema Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 5:07 AM
As amazing as Constance! Good Luck!
Haight Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:36 AM
An absolute amazing Acrostic, Constance, and your personification is very powerful and comprehensive as seen from the decaying car would it have a heart and soul! Love it - a 7 and Fav for me. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Very nicely done, Constance, great acrostic and personification, makes you feel sorry for the car, nice flow, hope it does well in contest. Looks like a winner to me! JDH
Muideen Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Lol! You penned this great meaningful..... You personified it eloquent and brilliant; that is you my friend.........A.M.
Gupta Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Your poem shows that words are more effective than paints and lights.... great job...
Misra Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Beautifully written, Broken Wings. It's a sureshit winner. Will be coming back to congratulate you for sure. ~karam~
Misra Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 10:27 PM
*sureshot (awfully sorry for the autocorrect) ~karam~
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