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Rusted and Busted

No more gleam, no more shine, not once Once I rolled the production lines Lines busted and broken, no more sublime Sublime when rolling the production line Production line filled with joy and glee Glee in the past, no one loves me No one loves me, each day I pine I pine for the days of the production line Production line when I was smart Smart, victorious and filled with grace Grace has gone in this grim place Place a thought in your heart for thee Thee is dead, oh me, oh my My life exterminated Exterminated forever

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Date: 6/12/2016 9:32:00 AM
Half an acrostic will have to do, I could not make it work:)
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:53:00 AM
Clever acrostic but made me feel very sad John:-) good luck in the contest.
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John Scott
Date: 6/11/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thank you. I cheat. I only do the contests that look easier. xx:)

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