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Rust

I'm in need of good friends I can trust. Friends who tell what they see when they must. Not like those who just say, "You're all shiny today;" when, instead, they should say, "You're all rust." Entered in Rick Parise's contest, 'Rust'.

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Date: 12/30/2011 10:06:00 PM
Just like the late John Lennon sang in one of his songs on the "Imagine" album. "All I want is the truth, just gimmie some truth". Good limerick, John.
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:30:00 AM
Excellent limerick John, good luck in the contest, should do very well. harry
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:54:00 AM
A really cool Limerick. Totally enjoyed reading it. Great rhythm and rhyme. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/25/2011 6:58:00 PM
Long as your personality do shine, mister you are doing fine, i trust... on santas merry time....
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Date: 12/25/2011 4:52:00 PM
clever and creative! great idea to use a limerick for this contest - i love it!
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Date: 12/25/2011 3:54:00 AM
All the best. Love it.x
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Date: 12/24/2011 10:17:00 PM
John, this is PERFECTLY metered and cute to boot. I Love how you did the topic. WHAT the HECK? LIGHT VERSE? You march straight over to that button and click on LIMERICK, sir! Now what was the name of the other limerick you said might not be one? If I don't find it, you tell me, ok? Merry Christmas!!!
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:55:00 PM
John, good luck in Ricks, contest... nice thought,... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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