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Russian Dreams

Russian Dreams

Beans sprout
Old women pick
Sun burns our fate
Old men die in fields of vodka

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/7/2024 11:10:00 AM

Aurore, you describe a sad state of affairs. Since this was written almost 10 years ago, it's gotten worse. Interesting to go back and read work like this...thanks!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/3/2017 12:04:00 AM

Yes vodka kills. Your poem is true and nice

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2015 7:45:00 AM

Sadly it is an epidemic in Russia. When people feel hopeless they turn to whatever small pleasure they can find.

Aurore Severo
Date: 12/27/2015 1:24:00 AM

Very very true, I have seen and felt the pain, xoxoxoxo

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2015 2:07:00 PM

And many did Aurore, in many a field in many a place. Nicely told :) James

Aurore Severo
Date: 10/1/2015 7:20:00 AM

thank you for reading! xoxoxox

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/9/2015 9:40:00 PM

An evolution of life's long plight, eloquated in a single write.

Aurore Severo
Date: 10/1/2015 7:20:00 AM

thank you xoxo

Eve Roper

Date: 8/9/2015 9:38:00 AM

Aurore, beautiful pen a 7, it is ashame that it does occur. Hugs Eve

Aurore Severo
Date: 8/9/2015 4:02:00 PM

thank you xoxo

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/3/2015 8:04:00 AM

Beautiful. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:44:00 PM

thank you ravi xoxo

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/1/2015 5:19:00 PM

before they die, I hope they pass me my cup of orange juice....I take the screw driver and let myself loose....so I can reminisce as I stagger to my seat....they call her mother Russia and she makes my knees weak.....cheers.....;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/1/2015 8:48:00 AM

Sadly the desire to escape the mundane and hopelessness of poverty causes men to drown there sorrows in illusionary water.

Aurore Severo
Date: 8/4/2015 11:43:00 PM

thank you xoxo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2015 7:13:00 AM

Very good quality work..I enjoyed reading this one..Could call Free Verse or Prose Poetry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..Welcome to soup..

Aurore Severo
Date: 8/1/2015 12:59:00 PM

thank you xoxo

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/1/2015 3:03:00 AM

A lovely penned here, a beautiful subject you describe with vivid imagery and eloquence in the heart of the readers, a sad touched indeed. Excellent............A.M.

Aurore Severo
Date: 8/1/2015 12:59:00 PM

thank you xoxo

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