Rushing Waters

send my love to moments I lost when tomorrow never warned of frost

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/23/2009 6:53:00 AM

Wow Jim, Truly outstanding. I am amazed at all you said in these two lines. Love, Carol

Ann Anderson

Date: 7/19/2009 6:53:00 AM

I just love this James, it is something I would have thought a famous poet would have wrote, I truely mean that, I don't praise for praise sake, I really find this astounding, take care Ann.

Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 7/18/2009 12:39:00 PM

Thank you for your compliments! :) Like Farah said, this is concise, it works amazingly to add strength. I love how most of your poetry is excessively minimal and still conveys feeling and says something strong and worthwhile. You really prove that sometimes two lines are better than twenty. :) Thanks again for reading my stuff! I'm flattered that you find it interesting. Nathaniel

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/18/2009 8:39:00 AM

A great concise piece..thank you for sharing

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 7/16/2009 4:11:00 PM

That piece is great. I liked it

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/16/2009 11:07:00 AM

this is short and simple and VERY interesting! i really like this one....and although it is short it still has a stroy to tell and that story is definately worth telling twice! great write! keep going!! Ciara=)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2009 3:51:00 AM

Interesting writing. Thanks for your comment. Sara

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/15/2009 8:48:00 PM

Great Work James!!! I love the last line.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/15/2009 4:59:00 PM

Excellent my friend....digging the frost line...well done.