Sandra Haight Poet Rondeau

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Rush With Me, Wind

"The wind is the pounding of my heart."

Rush with me, wind! Help my heart pound,
with forces of tornado's sound;
yet, gentle as a summer breeze
slow dancing, twirling through the trees.
My heart, like wind- prevails unbound.

My heart, like wind, is often bound
by pressures building- quite profound
to weather seasons with great ease.
Rush with me, wind!

From strong to calm, most winds rebound;
my heart's emotion is compound.
But, like the wind, it guarantees
those yins and yangs no one foresees.
In shifting force- accord is found.
Rush with me, wind!


August 2, 2022

For A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD No 1212 Poetry Contest

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Constance La France September 6, 2022 at 11:22 PM Sandra, excellent Rondeau poem beautiful penned and presented. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, I like your image too, God Bless ~

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2022 at 6:52 AM Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara

Ann Peck September 1, 2022 at 7:44 PM Dear Sandra, Your poem is so lovely! I love your "rush with me, wind" concept. Congratulations on first place

Sara Kendrick August 17, 2022 at 4:17 PM I enjoyed reading your contest entry today. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. It has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. I can imagine dancing with a gentle breeze. Thank you for stopping by my blog. Sara

Beryl Edmonds August 2, 2022 at 3:42 PM Lovely Sandra, an awesome write. We don’t see the wind we feel it and hear its sound - “In shifting force- accord is found.” ~ Best wishes, Belle