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"The wind is the pounding of my heart." Rush with me, wind! Help my heart pound, with forces of tornado's sound; yet, gentle as a summer breeze slow dancing, twirling through the trees. My heart, like wind- prevails unbound. My heart, like wind, is often bound by pressures building- quite profound to weather seasons with great ease. Rush with me, wind! From strong to calm, most winds rebound; my heart's emotion is compound. But, like the wind, it guarantees those yins and yangs no one foresees. In shifting force- accord is found. Rush with me, wind! August 2, 2022 For A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD No 1212 Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/6/2022 11:22:00 PM
Sandra, excellent Rondeau poem beautiful penned and presented. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, I like your image too, God Bless ~
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Date: 9/2/2022 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/1/2022 7:44:00 PM
Dear Sandra, Your poem is so lovely! I love your "rush with me, wind" concept. Congratulations on first place
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Date: 8/17/2022 4:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry today. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. It has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. I can imagine dancing with a gentle breeze. Thank you for stopping by my blog. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2022 3:42:00 PM
Lovely Sandra, an awesome write. We don’t see the wind we feel it and hear its sound - “In shifting force- accord is found.” ~ Best wishes, Belle
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