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Rush of My Pulse

“The wind is the pounding of my heart.” Rush of my pulse ‘neath Autumn trees. The brisk, cool wind - twist, coil and twine. Refreshing eucalyptus-breeze - Rush of my pulse. Suddenly surrounded - all mine. Dalliance incites me to freeze. This uptick of heart is divine. Deep breath, breathless, the swoon of knees. Inspirited cheeks, cerise-wine. This heartbeat of maples decrees - Rush of my pulse. 8/15/2022 Contest: Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form Sponsor: Constance La France Roundel - abaR/bab/abaR Refrain - 4 syllables, other lines 8 syllables Used RhymeZone.Com and HowManySyllables.Com and PS Grammar Checker

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Date: 9/6/2022 11:20:00 PM
Kim, excellent Roundel poem beautifully penned and presented. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2022 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! I enjoyed!
Date: 9/2/2022 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Kim. It's amply deserved with this wonderful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2022 11:42:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/2/2022 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2022 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/16/2022 2:08:00 AM
Your roundel should obtain a high place. Best of luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2022 5:23:00 AM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it!

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