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RUPTURED OMBILICAL CORD



lost every notion of the rhythms of life
atrophied links with nature
lost blind and deaf puppets



Posted in March, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/28/2018 8:14:00 AM
Wow, Line! Love this!
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Date: 3/28/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/28/2018 6:45:00 AM
Truth pen :)
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Date: 3/28/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Yazmin.
Date: 3/28/2018 2:48:00 AM
'Blind and deaf puppets'. So many ways to give meaning to that...
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Date: 3/28/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Kai. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/27/2018 10:20:00 PM
Wonderfully heavy in just 3 lines! Bravo!
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Date: 3/27/2018 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, James.
Date: 3/27/2018 9:50:00 PM
That's a nice dense, thick and chewy piece of poetry. Awesome ink Line. xomo!
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Date: 3/27/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/27/2018 8:47:00 PM
Sad one, Line. I just happened on this one and saw nobody had been here yet. Isn't it crazy at Soup lately? I might as well not spend much time here if it does me hardly any good. I want to be watching tv!! Let me find that pantoum of yours though. I think there is a way to search one's poetry by form and find something. If you have very few pantoums, It should be easy to figure out.
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Date: 3/27/2018 10:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Andrea. I think people are on vacation or taking a break. Line xx