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Ruptured Umbilical Cord

lost every notion of life's cosmic rhythms atrophied links with nature blind deaf marionettes AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on March 27, 2018

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2018 8:14:00 AM

Wow, Line! Love this!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2018 8:20:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Yazmin Malik

Date: 3/28/2018 6:45:00 AM

Truth pen :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Yazmin.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/28/2018 2:48:00 AM

'Blind and deaf puppets'. So many ways to give meaning to that...

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2018 7:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Kai. Much appreciated.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/27/2018 10:20:00 PM

Wonderfully heavy in just 3 lines! Bravo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2018 10:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, James.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/27/2018 9:50:00 PM

That's a nice dense, thick and chewy piece of poetry. Awesome ink Line. xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2018 8:47:00 PM

Sad one, Line. I just happened on this one and saw nobody had been here yet. Isn't it crazy at Soup lately? I might as well not spend much time here if it does me hardly any good. I want to be watching tv!! Let me find that pantoum of yours though. I think there is a way to search one's poetry by form and find something. If you have very few pantoums, It should be easy to figure out.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2018 10:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Andrea. I think people are on vacation or taking a break. Line xx