Jerry Hackett Poet Concrete

Runoff

The snow brings life, mine's a short cold one 
        Being pushed around in fear of the sun
              Held and shaped by a mitted hand
                Then melting into the green land
                              Riding rivers to the sea
                                  A warmer wetter me
                                                What a trip
                                                   Drip drip
                                                      drip...
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Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 11:07 AM Congratulations on your win with this unique write. I enjoyed. Jerry Hackett April 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM Thanks, it is really time for spring.

Reason A. Poteet April 18, 2018 at 2:30 PM Great story from the POV of the melting snow. Congratulations on a fine write. Jerry Hackett April 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM Thanks, it is time for spring.

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 7:41 PM Congratulations on your win , Jerry.. Hugs Eve ~`* Jerry Hackett April 18, 2018 at 3:46 AM Thanks, its time for spring

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:14 PM - Congratulations, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jerry Hackett April 18, 2018 at 3:46 AM Thanks, it is time for spring

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 11:29 AM you took a melting snowball to a new level Jerry - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Jerry Hackett April 18, 2018 at 3:47 AM Thank you Jan, and now its time for spring.

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:49 AM Thanks for entering my contest with this original and charming poem, Jerry. Jerry Hackett April 18, 2018 at 3:48 AM Line, Thanks. Poetry soup is a nice place to visit because of people like you who host the contests. Stay dry.