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Running Down the Streets

aisles of antiques
corrugated with named streets -
cups, saucers and book bindings
…stomach’s churning. i’m paying,
booking with dog-eared treasures.

7/27/2021

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Joanna Daniel

July 28, 2021 at 7:26 AM

You have described it beautifully, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 8:54 AM

Thank you, Jo! :)

Paul Callus

July 28, 2021 at 6:32 AM

A treasure of a poem, Kim! I love looking around, though I rarely buy anything. Savouring the atmosphere is alreday ample for me. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 8:54 AM

Looking is fun!

Harry Horsman

July 28, 2021 at 1:57 AM

Wow, Interesting poem, Kim, love it.

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 4:48 AM

Thank you, dear friend!

Eve Roper

July 27, 2021 at 8:29 PM

I love antiques , it churns my stomach when they are mistreated.

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 4:48 AM

For sure! :(

Michelle Faulkner

July 27, 2021 at 8:27 PM

I love 'aisles of antiques', makes me think of a charming shop on a small main street~

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 4:48 AM

Thank you, Michelle!

Gershon Wolf

July 27, 2021 at 8:18 PM

Such a nostalgic mood you've created with your tanka, Kim. I feel as if you've transported me back in time, to cobblestone lanes and horse-drawn buggies. Thanks! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

July 28, 2021 at 5:02 AM

Love where your mind went! Have a happy day!