Running Down the Streets

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aisles of antiques corrugated with named streets - cups, saucers and book bindings …stomach’s churning. i’m paying, booking with dog-eared treasures. 7/27/2021

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/28/2021 7:26:00 AM

You have described it beautifully, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jo! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2021 6:32:00 AM

A treasure of a poem, Kim! I love looking around, though I rarely buy anything. Savouring the atmosphere is alreday ample for me. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 8:54:00 AM

Looking is fun!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2021 1:57:00 AM

Wow, Interesting poem, Kim, love it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2021 8:29:00 PM

I love antiques , it churns my stomach when they are mistreated.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 4:48:00 AM

For sure! :(

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/27/2021 8:27:00 PM

I love 'aisles of antiques', makes me think of a charming shop on a small main street~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/27/2021 8:18:00 PM

Such a nostalgic mood you've created with your tanka, Kim. I feel as if you've transported me back in time, to cobblestone lanes and horse-drawn buggies. Thanks! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 5:02:00 AM

Love where your mind went! Have a happy day!