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Running Bare

Towards the edge, of the pool I, was running bare. Not very brave. There already, in the pool, swam the others, as nature made. All my skin, was a showing, such a scary, sight to see. But the others, kept on cheering, so that they, could get a peek. Running bare, into the water, never again, not on your life. Running bare, into the water, embarrassment, I won't survive. I couldn't find, secluded water, nor a floatie, wide enough. I couldn't find, any shelter, that would hide, all my stuff. In the sunlight, they could see me, splashing water, so to hide. As my cheeks, were getting redder, others swam, to be by my side. Running bare, into the water, never again, not on your life. Running bare, into the water, embarrassment, I won't survive. With all the splashing, in the water, they thought, I was drowning. They all swam, out to help me, just to find, me sitting there. In just a few, inches of water, with the sun, strong, beating down. After the laughter had subsided, I got a sunburn, lotion rub down. Running bare, into the water, never again, not on your life. Running bare, into the water, embarrassment, I won't survive. For the contest: Summertime, Summertime... Hosted by: Deborah Guzzi inspired by the song: Running Bear, by Johnny Preston Placement: 7th

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Date: 8/17/2010 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Deborah Guzzi's contest " Summertime,Summertime, Sum, Sum, Summertime". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:57:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Paula
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:18:00 PM
hahaha ,good one, Paula and I love the song you chose to parody. LUv, Andrea ps so clever to use "bare" for Bear.
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:53:00 PM
Great Work Paula. Once would be enough. Congratulations on yopur win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:15:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your winning poem in Debbie's contest .. awesome song and great rewrite.. amazing win.. tonight to enjoy more sweet success ..with luv from Italy..my friend..caio..
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:05:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Paula. The best to you in the contest.Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 2:08:00 PM
that had to be a sight hehehe I would of tried to cover up my woofers and tweeters lol great entry for contest and you are right way different than mine lol thanks also kindly for your review keep up the great writing
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Date: 8/8/2010 1:16:00 PM
Oh my, Paula, you took quite a creative spin on "Running Bear." As soon as I saw the title, I knew I'd be in for some laughs and you sure delivered. But you won't catch me running bare anywhere. :) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:29:00 PM
too cute, good luck in the contest
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