Notes About The Poem

runaway turbulence


suddenly my world got dark
and spun out of control
thrust in the eye of the storm
all i could see was you
and how i would find 
my way back to your arms



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on March 14, 2025 to contest THRUST IN THE CENTRE OF THE STORM, ALL I COULD SEE WAS YOU sponsored by ANOUCHEKA GANGABISSOON  -  Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. So delighted to see it on the winners' list. Sara K
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Much appreciated, thanks Sara ~
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations Line! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Thank you ~ have a lovely day
Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 10:21 PM
a dark vision -- well spelled out. G.L. in the contest, my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 6:37 AM
thanks Gershon ~ much appreciated
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