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Poetry/Kyrielle/Rumi and Faith Mixed
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1627-352-03
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 03, 2024
For the International contest, Mixed
Sponsor, Sara Kenrick, Judged 03/12/2024

11th Place

You are meant to thrive not just survive | The Red Fairy Project

"#3, Rumi quote: Let the beauty of what you love, be what you do." What I love is my perfect life, Falling to my knees at life's strife: And I seek beauty when alone: O, God is my foundation stone. I sketch till hands are pencil stained, And write till my hands are ink veined: I love to explore the unknown: O, God is my foundation stone. I tend lovely flowers growing, Love my garden overflowing: And sing in a voice monotone: O, God is my foundation stone. What I do is my reflection, thanks Rumi for the direction: thanks Lord for heavenly light shone: O, God is my foundation stone. Poetry and art my delight, love photos taken in dawn's light: With Rumi and God I have grown: O, God is my foundation stone.

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Date: 3/15/2024 9:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your entry in my contest. Thank you for participating in it. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:31:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/7/2024 10:57:00 AM
Constance, there is such a gentle serenity in your words. Your poems reflect your love of writing, painting and your garden along with many of your more somber themes on life and death. I love the sense of gratitude in this poem. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2024 10:59:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment and compliment an encouragement, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/4/2024 10:49:00 AM
Nice poem with the theme of Rumi's quote.
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:07:00 PM
Jay, thank you for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 4:49:00 PM
a lovely and uplifting write, Constance. I can see your creative and kind spirit shining through your words, words of gratitude. Nicely done. PS I love gardening and writing as well...and reading...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:08:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the compliment and nice comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 2:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem Constance, you have captured the theme of the quote Rumi wrote perfectly… Beryl
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:11:00 PM
Beryl, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 12:47:00 PM
Your poem, Constance, is so well-written. I admire the way you incorporated your understanding of the Rumi quote to create a beautiful piece of poetry. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:12:00 PM
Sotto, thank you for the compliment, and nice comment, and encouragement, blessings, Constance

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