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I'd
   rather
           color
                 outside
                          the
lines

introspectioni do not know?

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Jay Loveless

Date: 4/8/2009 11:34:00 AM

I must say I love this =D

Brian Strand

Date: 2/6/2009 8:09:00 AM

Good guideline Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/14/2009 9:30:00 AM

YES!!!!! ___ I hate rules. My lowest grade in school was always conduct. that's why I love kids. Well meaning people stifle their growth artistically. Vince

Dustin Ziemer

Date: 1/7/2009 7:12:00 AM

Short and sweet, nice:)

Date: 1/4/2009 12:59:00 PM

I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Mark's contest. Keep up the good writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/3/2009 9:15:00 AM

Awesome. I love this one, sorry I missed it before, as I feel the very same! congrats! Kristin

Sue Mason

Date: 1/3/2009 9:01:00 AM

Absolutely ... LOL ... this is awesome, Laurie and a well deserved winner in Mark's contest. I'm going to have to read more of your writing as I don't know that we have "met" yet. Its hard to keep up with everybody ... smile ... here at the Soup! Hope '09 is a great year for you and Congratulations on your win!!

Brian Strand

Date: 1/3/2009 1:04:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Mark's contest Laurie.Rgds Brian.A girl after my own heart

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/2/2009 5:27:00 PM

This was so clever, and well said. Congratulations Laurie...I love especially that last word ..going outside the lines! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/2/2009 2:33:00 PM

Good for you and your individuality. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 1/2/2009 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations, Laurie, on your well deserved win in Mark's excellent contest. Love, Nigel

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/2/2009 10:07:00 AM

Warmest congrats Laurie on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Happy new year! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/26/2008 1:18:00 PM

It's your picture. Awesome poem. You have said so much within these beautifully written words.

John Rhinem

Date: 12/9/2008 6:38:00 PM

"Hello Blessed & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!"~It was good to hear from you dear lady! And yes, to color outside of the lines, is a marking of your own uniqueness'~And from I have seen of your preciousness thus far~"You" are a very bright and lovely flower to behold! So, do not be a stranger dear lady, for, it would be quite a loss I believe~Now, that I have seen "Your Heavenly Glow!"~"Love Always To You & All You Love, Always, John!"~Bye Dear Lady!:)

Brian Strand

Date: 11/29/2008 7:58:00 AM

A rebel heart can break new ground Laurie.Nice work.Rgds Brian

Date: 11/28/2008 9:09:00 PM

Hi Laurie, we have a huge bag of crayons and I'm willing to share. Red is a pretty important color to be missing. If you need help in that, count on me. It sounds like too much fun to be left out. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/28/2008 8:07:00 PM

My dear, this is fabulous.! BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/28/2008 7:15:00 PM

You knocked this one out of the park! Great job, Laurie! Don't think you need luck, but best wishes in the contest! Looks like a winner! ~ Love, Carrie......ps. your comments were so kind, Laurie, thank you so much for reading my poems.

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/28/2008 7:09:00 PM

That poem was supposed to be dedicated to John Rhinem I don't know how to spell his name but he is on poetrysoup.. . Love Alexz^.^

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/28/2008 6:55:00 PM

AWESOME!!!!! Could you maybe read my brand new poem and tell me what you think about it? ^.^ Love Alexz

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/28/2008 2:31:00 PM

Unique, clever and different. Completely excellent. Love, Shar

Date: 11/28/2008 2:30:00 PM

Thank you for allowing me to smile with this poem. Wonderful thought--I'll color with you. I like the visual format of this poem too. Nice job! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

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