Rue

In the starless dark night you will find me Hiding in azure colors of the moon Waiting for your touch of forgiveness be Bestowing the solace of leaving too soon I have tried but forgotten the meaning Of how to gaze upon your face's glow How could time take this from my soul grieving While my empty heart has nowhere to go I lament my love for I have trespassed I have wept too long and hard to endure I suffer the loss of your hearts caress And your love that was infinite and pure In the starless night please come find me soon Masked in the azure colors of the moon 7-19-2019

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John Watt

Date: 8/17/2023 11:42:00 AM

Lonna, beautiful sonnet from an aching heart. I feel your pain through your words. Congrats for your win ~ John

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/27/2023 7:19:00 PM

I so appreciate your comments! Heal and happiness! Lonna

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/1/2020 3:54:00 PM

This is such a heartfelt expression Lonna. My blessings to you. Congratulations on your win.

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/2/2020 10:12:00 PM

Aditi, I so appreciate your expression!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2020 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, lonna. Hugs Eve

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/2/2020 10:13:00 PM

Thank you Eve. Hope you are well and happy!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/28/2019 1:01:00 PM

I see you have another winner, congrats!

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/29/2019 1:09:00 PM

Richard I so appreciate your continual encouragement. Lonna

John Hamilton

Date: 9/26/2019 7:35:00 PM

Well done congrats on a fine win!

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/29/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thank you so very much John. Lonna

John Gondolf

Date: 7/17/2019 7:19:00 AM

What a beautifully written melancholy sonnet, Lonna, I enjoyed reading it. John

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 7/31/2019 11:05:00 PM

So good knowing that you enjoyed it John. Lonna

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2019 12:47:00 PM

Wow! Your mastery of words is resounding in my heart right now. Darling! You say you took a break. I am glad it is over. I am clapping and so is Trixie, my muse! Welcome HOME!

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 7/31/2019 11:05:00 PM

Caren, Thank you for your recognition. It feels like the absolute right place for me to be right now. Especially in that I'm learning something everyday. Lonna

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/12/2019 5:28:00 PM

I really like the simple elegance of this poem and the emotions it paints