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Rubik Cube

rubik cube close by
unsolvable small puzzle
several years pass

thoughts turn to easy
solution~give up~ discard
divorce never right?

maybe a smooth round
one that would glide easier
marriage counseling?  

Written: January 11, 2021
Looked up this form. I hope it is correct..

1rubik cube close by 5
2unsolvable small puzzle 7
3several years pass 5
4 0
5thoughts turn to easy 5
6solution~give up~ discard 7
7divorce never right? 5
8maybe a smooth round 5
9one that would glide easier 7
10marriage counseling? 5

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/16/2021 1:23:00 PM I never noticed the winners here. I sure did not win, but good to see you got a win. Belated Congrats, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/16/2021 1:33:00 PM Andrea, Thank you for the belated congrats. Sara

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/26/2021 1:01:00 PM Sara, congrats on your win. Sometimes we can't get our heads around either - marriage or the cube! Blessings of clarity my friend. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/16/2021 1:33:00 PM Sam, Yes, we have to keep working on the marriage for sure and it is not easy. Thanks for your visit. Sara

David Kavanagh Date: 1/26/2021 8:52:00 AM Great analogy Sara, marriage and the Rubik cube, I haven’t finished either yet, still working on both, congratulations, cheers David Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 2/16/2021 1:35:00 PM David, It takes time. I wonder if I will solve my Rubik Cube at the end as my life passes away and will my marriage become perfect at that time? Only God knows the future. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2021 7:03:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2021 2:00:00 PM SS, I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara

Jenna Logan Date: 1/26/2021 6:01:00 AM Congratulations on your poem making the winning list, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2021 2:01:00 PM Jenna, Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Beata Agustin Date: 1/26/2021 1:56:00 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2021 5:43:00 AM Beata, Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 1/26/2021 1:24:00 AM Very clever. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2021 5:42:00 AM Kai, Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/16/2021 5:55:00 AM Interesting personification Sara. I enjoy trying new forms too. This one looks interesting. :) Linda Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/16/2021 8:08:00 AM Linda, I hope you do try a Choka. Your visit and comments are always encouraging. Sara

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/13/2021 4:50:00 PM I enjoyed the analogy!!! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/14/2021 5:09:00 AM Andrea, Your acknowledgement of my work and a kind review lets me know that I got it somewhat right. Sara

Harry Horsman Date: 1/12/2021 11:31:00 PM LOve the inter woven personification here..Stay Safe, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/13/2021 4:56:00 AM Harry, Thanks so much. Your review is uplifting. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/12/2021 1:02:00 PM lol, your being very witty today with this, nicely done Sara, Keep well, keep penning, it makes us stay healthy. Love xo Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/13/2021 4:53:00 AM Mystic, One has to laugh about it or else trying to solve this riddle would drive a person insane. LOL..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2021 6:22:00 AM - This cube ... too much thinking ... difficult to solve :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2021 7:27:00 AM Anne, Yes, too much thinking but it helps to keep pathways open so that one doesn't lose them. Your acknowledgement of my work is always encouraging. Sara

Eve Roper Date: 1/11/2021 10:20:00 PM Sara, I sure my feelings with Victory , it would be easier to go to a counsel then play that silly thing. I tried to pull a part to win... :) good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2021 5:50:00 AM Eve, The one I have next to my chair my son tried to tear it apart and was going to put it back together right but he could not get it apart. LOL..He was going to show me he could solve it. LOL..I need a new one. I have gone online to look at videos of solutions. I still can't get but one side and part of another. LOL..Your visit and review of my work is uplifting. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/11/2021 12:44:00 PM I'm sure counselling is easier than solving the rubric. ~~ Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/11/2021 1:43:00 PM Victor, Yes, I am sure it can be. Your reviews of my work always encourage. Sara

Judy Ball Date: 1/11/2021 11:42:00 AM Hmmm Marriage can be like trying to solve a difficult puzzle. Sometimes there is just no way because the pieces just don't fit. Sometimes seeking help is the answer. A clever way to do this one. Good luck in the contet. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/11/2021 1:24:00 PM Judy, Yes, marriage is melding two people from different homes, lifestyles, etc. together for life. Not an easy mix. So much goes into it that it is surprising anyone makes it but a large portion do. Your review of my work is encouraging. Sara

Arturo Michael Date: 1/11/2021 9:44:00 AM Imagine two hearts beating as one...a difficult task indeed...Marriage is worth the try, even the weak of heart will get stronger because of it... especially with children. All the best. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/11/2021 10:11:00 AM Michael, Well, we have been married for 58 years so I guess we will both stay..LOL..However, marriage is a puzzle and one has to constantly work on it or it will go the way of an unsolved puzzled. Your visit is inspiring. Sara