Routine

Day has brightly dawned Sun in his gold chariot, comes in royalty The struggle for livelihood, is on till the fall of night
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Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 6:04 AM
I love the way you brought the sun in, riding in his chariot!
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 8:15 PM
'Ain't this the truth,' as a good friend would always say to me. Spot-on, Valsa. Superb utilization of the tanka form, indeed! ~ Gershon
One Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Lovely imagery in your tanka... once again a great selection of words..
Brul Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 7:40 AM
A brilliant tanka...The richness of its imagery fills the senses. Vivid and crisp.
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Such a stunning imagery dear Valsa, the day dawned and the sun coming up in a gold chariot...exquisitely crafted.
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 4:57 AM
I like your description Valsa: Sun in his gold chariot, comes in royalty... so well said!
Deo Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Glad your sense of routines us noted in color upon God's good Earth. Shalom shalom Sis
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