Rouge

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A Clarity Pyramid Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May. ~ August 2025

ROUGE
powder
cosmetic

a geisha softens
her stark pale complexion 
subtly adding warmth to cheeks 

“a carnation in the teahouse”

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2025 1:00:00 PM

wow, this one is a standout, Paul. Superb.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2025 2:45:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Rouge" write. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a fun day writing away..........

Tom Woody

Date: 8/18/2025 5:28:00 AM

Awesome Paul. Did you see the movie Memoirs of a Geisha? Really gave us a peek into their world, at least in years past