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rotten leaves behind, inspirational minichu

Again friend, when your hope flamboyantly skedaddles creamy, gleamy scope tears that tear The Universe reverse your present with presents believe! Breathe through the breath of lead rise!! Again friend, when your dreams reverse your present with presents rise!!

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Silent One

Date: 12/11/2023 12:55:00 PM

This is a deep minichu.. I hope the judge of the contest appreciates it..

Tonye George
Date: 12/11/2023 3:02:00 PM

I hope so too, I'm just trying. Thank you for your immense support silent.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2023 12:44:00 PM

Oh beautiful write dear tonye. Your minuchu is moving: Your last stanza conveys a profound and inspiring message. I loved it. Pleasure reading you always . Best wishes if its for the contest

Tonye George
Date: 12/11/2023 3:03:00 PM

The pleasure is mine ink. Thank you.