Rotation of Scenes

Patches of snow sprinkled on the leaves
Lay on the hill climbed many times
And I wonder how many scenes
Have been kept safely in memory
Through seasons of visions and thoughts
Whether it be with chill or with warmth

Bare trees revealing the sky’s beauty
Opening up the distant views
Or trees in full bloom with close up color
Later fallen like paper under the snow
In rotation of scenes captured
On the hill that has quietly frozen

As if sleeping, waiting to be seen and heard
In the slow dripping, melting of spring
In this wonder of momentary silence
Except for the crackling of leaves,
I remember in a cold breath of fresh air
How winter begins, on the hill

Heidi Sands

11/18/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Beautiful imagery , Heidi, enjoyed reading the well crafted verse. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Hi Eve. I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Daniel Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 8:24 AM
You combine nature and poetry so well, Heidi, I wish I could see more of such inspiring nature in our city...really enjoyed:)
Sands Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Thank you so much Jo. Your kind comment makes me smile today. I hope that you can see more inspiring nature soon :)
Y. Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 2:18 PM
WoW! Hedi, You have painted such a beautiful picture with words. It is just breathtaking. And I got lost in the beauty of it. PS, It's sooo good to have you back. I'm so sorry for not visting you sooner, I'm not as active as I used to be:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Hi Alexis! Thank you so much for your kind comment! I appreciate it. I am not as active at times as well, but I am happy you are here when you have the time to be! :)
Smith Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 11:14 AM
So beautiful Heidi
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Tim :) Have a nice day today.
Hoffman Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Winter time beginning portrayed beautifully in this wonderful nature poem Heidi! Great imagery!~Che :)
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Thank you Cheryl :)
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November 19, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Ah, yes, the cold Winter mornings...but I don't know what it's like upon a Hill, but I do know what its like here where I live...in the ever splendid flat lands! We have had snow, but it has never stuck yet! We are awaiting our first measurable snowfall...which could come soon! You never know when that will happen...we just had a deluge of rain...we got about 2.5 to 3.0 inches of rain yesterday, our field is full of water! I really enjoyed reading your enlightening poem this morning! Great Work!
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Hi Russell. I think the rain you speak of may be with us here today, as I write this. Thank you for your comment and support :)
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November 19, 2017 at 3:13 AM
Thank God for the rotation of scenes in mlther nature. Superbly painted by your words dearest, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Yes, that is so true Demetrios. It is nice to see you here. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 11:28 PM
This is GREAT poetry, Heidi! This poem captivated my mind, captured my heart. My favorite poem of yours thus far out of your many excellent poetic offerings. Pen brilliance shining in cosmic inner spaces. Golden glow poetry. Love and smiles always.
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Wow Freddie . Thank you. Over the years I mainly written free verse. So when I do the rhyming and new forms, I tend to miss it. I am happy you have found a favorite in this one. I appreciate your kind comments on the poem and title :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Btw ... great title. I'm all in if you present your poem w/an alluring title. Love and hugs always, sis.
May Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Each season holds beauty, Very well depicted Heidi..
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Hi Joseph. Yes each season does hold so much beauty. Thank you :)
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November 18, 2017 at 6:39 PM
I really like this, Heidi! It's as if I am "remembering how winter begins, on the hill."
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM
I am happy you like this Sunlite. Thank you :)
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:50 PM
A lovely poem--enjoyed reading it--a beautiful depiction of changing season!
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Vijay. It is nice to hear you enjoyed it :)
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:14 PM
wherever we are Winter comes at its own pleasure...nice poetic verse Heidi
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:15 PM
That is true, it does come at its own pleasure. Thank you for your visit and comment Frederic :)
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