Rotation of Scenes

Patches of snow sprinkled on the leaves
Lay on the hill climbed many times
And I wonder how many scenes
Have been kept safely in memory
Through seasons of visions and thoughts
Whether it be with chill or with warmth

Bare trees revealing the sky’s beauty
Opening up the distant views
Or trees in full bloom with close up color
Later fallen like paper under the snow
In rotation of scenes captured
On the hill that has quietly frozen

As if sleeping, waiting to be seen and heard
In the slow dripping, melting of spring
In this wonder of momentary silence
Except for the crackling of leaves,
I remember in a cold breath of fresh air
How winter begins, on the hill

Heidi Sands

11/18/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/21/2017 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery , Heidi, enjoyed reading the well crafted verse. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2017 12:40:00 PM
Hi Eve. I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 11/21/2017 8:24:00 AM
You combine nature and poetry so well, Heidi, I wish I could see more of such inspiring nature in our city...really enjoyed:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo. Your kind comment makes me smile today. I hope that you can see more inspiring nature soon :)
Date: 11/20/2017 2:18:00 PM
WoW! Hedi, You have painted such a beautiful picture with words. It is just breathtaking. And I got lost in the beauty of it. PS, It's sooo good to have you back. I'm so sorry for not visting you sooner, I'm not as active as I used to be:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2017 2:46:00 PM
Hi Alexis! Thank you so much for your kind comment! I appreciate it. I am not as active at times as well, but I am happy you are here when you have the time to be! :)
Date: 11/19/2017 11:14:00 AM
So beautiful Heidi
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Date: 11/19/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Tim :) Have a nice day today.
Date: 11/19/2017 9:34:00 AM
Winter time beginning portrayed beautifully in this wonderful nature poem Heidi! Great imagery!~Che :)
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Date: 11/19/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl :)
Date: 11/19/2017 6:13:00 AM
Ah, yes, the cold Winter mornings...but I don't know what it's like upon a Hill, but I do know what its like here where I live...in the ever splendid flat lands! We have had snow, but it has never stuck yet! We are awaiting our first measurable snowfall...which could come soon! You never know when that will happen...we just had a deluge of rain...we got about 2.5 to 3.0 inches of rain yesterday, our field is full of water! I really enjoyed reading your enlightening poem this morning! Great Work!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 7:51:00 AM
Hi Russell. I think the rain you speak of may be with us here today, as I write this. Thank you for your comment and support :)
Date: 11/19/2017 3:13:00 AM
Thank God for the rotation of scenes in mlther nature. Superbly painted by your words dearest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 7:50:00 AM
Yes, that is so true Demetrios. It is nice to see you here. Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 11/18/2017 11:28:00 PM
This is GREAT poetry, Heidi! This poem captivated my mind, captured my heart. My favorite poem of yours thus far out of your many excellent poetic offerings. Pen brilliance shining in cosmic inner spaces. Golden glow poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 7:49:00 AM
Wow Freddie . Thank you. Over the years I mainly written free verse. So when I do the rhyming and new forms, I tend to miss it. I am happy you have found a favorite in this one. I appreciate your kind comments on the poem and title :)
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Date: 11/18/2017 11:30:00 PM
Btw ... great title. I'm all in if you present your poem w/an alluring title. Love and hugs always, sis.
Date: 11/18/2017 7:13:00 PM
Each season holds beauty, Very well depicted Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 7:47:00 AM
Hi Joseph. Yes each season does hold so much beauty. Thank you :)
Date: 11/18/2017 6:39:00 PM
I really like this, Heidi! It's as if I am "remembering how winter begins, on the hill."
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 7:47:00 AM
I am happy you like this Sunlite. Thank you :)
Date: 11/18/2017 4:50:00 PM
A lovely poem--enjoyed reading it--a beautiful depiction of changing season!
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. It is nice to hear you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/18/2017 4:14:00 PM
wherever we are Winter comes at its own pleasure...nice poetic verse Heidi
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:15:00 PM
That is true, it does come at its own pleasure. Thank you for your visit and comment Frederic :)
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