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Rotary Whisk

 trees tremble, nuts fall
angels use of rotary whisk
the wind as if mint
refreshes my home
it is brisk, inviting
i’m cold
i don’t care
it is Fall

9/26/2022

autumnfree verse

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Alexis Y.

September 28, 2022 at 5:43 AM

Hi Kim, What a well written write. I echo what Evelyn said. Have a nice day-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

September 28, 2022 at 11:18 AM

Thank you so much!

Vijay Pandit

September 27, 2022 at 5:13 AM

It is that season. We feel the weather you convey through your words. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

September 28, 2022 at 11:18 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

September 26, 2022 at 8:18 PM

Such a lovely portrayal of cool, brisk autumn wind and weather. It's a fave. :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:30 AM

Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

September 26, 2022 at 4:20 PM

Fun :) We're not cold here yet, but this is an invigorating joyful fall poem!! :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:30 AM

Thank you, BJ!

Michael Tor

September 26, 2022 at 4:10 PM

Love your description of fall. Kim with the twist at the end not to care. Blessings. Loved your comment on my father's Poem. Funny how fathers are kind and caring all over, yours was and the bikes he build for you and your brother was wonderful to know and read...

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:29 AM

Great that we both have bike memories with our dads. Be blessed with those memories. So sorry for your loss, Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 26, 2022 at 1:40 PM

What a delightful depiction of Fall, dearest Kim. Love it! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:28 AM

Thank uou, dear Demetrios! :)

Victor Buhagiar

September 26, 2022 at 1:19 PM

Wonderful description of Fall. You won't see it in Malta though. It is now night and it 79 F. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:27 AM

Thank you! I enjoyed tropical weather for 3 years back 8n the 80’s when I lived in Hawaii (Oahu) Hugs, my friend!

Bill Baker

September 26, 2022 at 12:18 PM

Glad you're getting better, Kim. Covid in any form is tough on the system. Im liked the imagery in this one too. Bill

Kim Rodrigues

September 27, 2022 at 4:22 AM

Thank you, Bill!

Joseph P. DiMino

September 26, 2022 at 9:25 AM

Hmm? Beautiful, descriptive writing. Really Top Shelf. Not certain how to digest its meaning. Possibly both ways are correct. Refreshed by the cold, gone cold is my heart. You are a great writer my friend! A Fav!

Kim Rodrigues

September 26, 2022 at 9:54 AM

Thank you! I am enjoying the weather! Lost the chills from covid and enjoying the refreshment of Autumn! Blessings, dear one!

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