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Rotary Whisk

 trees tremble, nuts fall
angels use of rotary whisk
the wind as if mint
refreshes my home
it is brisk, inviting
i’m cold
i don’t care
it is Fall

9/26/2022

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Alexis Y. Date: 9/28/2022 5:43:00 AM Hi Kim, What a well written write. I echo what Evelyn said. Have a nice day-Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/28/2022 11:18:00 AM Thank you so much!

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/27/2022 5:13:00 AM It is that season. We feel the weather you convey through your words. Well done, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/28/2022 11:18:00 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/26/2022 8:18:00 PM Such a lovely portrayal of cool, brisk autumn wind and weather. It's a fave. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:30:00 AM Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 9/26/2022 4:20:00 PM Fun :) We're not cold here yet, but this is an invigorating joyful fall poem!! :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:30:00 AM Thank you, BJ!

Michael Tor Date: 9/26/2022 4:10:00 PM Love your description of fall. Kim with the twist at the end not to care. Blessings. Loved your comment on my father's Poem. Funny how fathers are kind and caring all over, yours was and the bikes he build for you and your brother was wonderful to know and read... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:29:00 AM Great that we both have bike memories with our dads. Be blessed with those memories. So sorry for your loss, Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/26/2022 1:40:00 PM What a delightful depiction of Fall, dearest Kim. Love it! Blessings! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:28:00 AM Thank uou, dear Demetrios! :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/26/2022 1:19:00 PM Wonderful description of Fall. You won't see it in Malta though. It is now night and it 79 F. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:27:00 AM Thank you! I enjoyed tropical weather for 3 years back 8n the 80’s when I lived in Hawaii (Oahu) Hugs, my friend!

Bill Baker Date: 9/26/2022 12:18:00 PM Glad you're getting better, Kim. Covid in any form is tough on the system. Im liked the imagery in this one too. Bill Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/27/2022 4:22:00 AM Thank you, Bill!

Joe Dimino Date: 9/26/2022 9:25:00 AM Hmm? Beautiful, descriptive writing. Really Top Shelf. Not certain how to digest its meaning. Possibly both ways are correct. Refreshed by the cold, gone cold is my heart. You are a great writer my friend! A Fav! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/26/2022 9:54:00 AM Thank you! I am enjoying the weather! Lost the chills from covid and enjoying the refreshment of Autumn! Blessings, dear one!