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Rotary Whisk

trees tremble, nuts fall angels use of rotary whisk the wind as if mint refreshes my home it is brisk, inviting i’m cold i don’t care it is Fall 9/26/2022

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Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2022 5:43:00 AM

Hi Kim, What a well written write. I echo what Evelyn said. Have a nice day-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2022 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2022 5:13:00 AM

It is that season. We feel the weather you convey through your words. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2022 11:18:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/26/2022 8:18:00 PM

Such a lovely portrayal of cool, brisk autumn wind and weather. It's a fave. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/26/2022 4:20:00 PM

Fun :) We're not cold here yet, but this is an invigorating joyful fall poem!! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, BJ!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2022 4:10:00 PM

Love your description of fall. Kim with the twist at the end not to care. Blessings. Loved your comment on my father's Poem. Funny how fathers are kind and caring all over, yours was and the bikes he build for you and your brother was wonderful to know and read...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:29:00 AM

Great that we both have bike memories with our dads. Be blessed with those memories. So sorry for your loss, Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/26/2022 1:40:00 PM

What a delightful depiction of Fall, dearest Kim. Love it! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:28:00 AM

Thank uou, dear Demetrios! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2022 1:19:00 PM

Wonderful description of Fall. You won't see it in Malta though. It is now night and it 79 F. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:27:00 AM

Thank you! I enjoyed tropical weather for 3 years back 8n the 80’s when I lived in Hawaii (Oahu) Hugs, my friend!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/26/2022 12:18:00 PM

Glad you're getting better, Kim. Covid in any form is tough on the system. Im liked the imagery in this one too. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2022 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, Bill!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/26/2022 9:25:00 AM

Hmm? Beautiful, descriptive writing. Really Top Shelf. Not certain how to digest its meaning. Possibly both ways are correct. Refreshed by the cold, gone cold is my heart. You are a great writer my friend! A Fav!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2022 9:54:00 AM

Thank you! I am enjoying the weather! Lost the chills from covid and enjoying the refreshment of Autumn! Blessings, dear one!