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Image result for candlelight romance in a harbor

candles stir mystique of  night
 to  whirl around  lit  gazes
    dripping on fate's  trance    awestruck
      …by rosy moments

in velvet pier's harbourview--
  stardust traces quivered  flesh
   drenching wax  of  smooth  passion
    … as two blazed lips melt



Valentine--Form D Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   1/17/2017
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/21/2017 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, lovely poem a joy to read.
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Date: 1/20/2017 10:43:00 PM
Sensational! Congratulations! A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 1/17/2017 2:33:00 AM
- A sweet romantic poem, Nette - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2017 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful work Nette...
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Date: 1/16/2017 5:07:00 PM
Very romantic, Nette! A lovely poem.
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Date: 1/16/2017 3:51:00 PM
Yeah! Just love this romantic moment you painted nette! As always just amazing.
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Date: 1/16/2017 2:56:00 PM
So awe inspiring nette... Lovely
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Date: 1/16/2017 1:45:00 PM
Quite romantic and alluring is this moment in time you have penned Nette. I am swooning.....
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