Nette Onclaud Poet Dodoitsu

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Rosy Moments

candles stir mystique of  night
 to  whirl around  lit  gazes
    dripping on fate's  trance    awestruck
      …by rosy moments

in velvet pier's harbourview--
  stardust traces quivered  flesh
   drenching wax  of  smooth  passion
    … as two blazed lips melt



Valentine--Form D Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   1/17/2017
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Roy Pett January 21, 2017 at 5:16 AM Congratulations Nette, lovely poem a joy to read.

Afzal Nusker January 20, 2017 at 10:43 PM Sensational! Congratulations! A 7 & a fav.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2017 at 2:33 AM - A sweet romantic poem, Nette - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith January 16, 2017 at 9:35 PM Beautiful work Nette...

White Wolf January 16, 2017 at 5:07 PM Very romantic, Nette! A lovely poem.

Maurice Yvonne January 16, 2017 at 3:51 PM Yeah! Just love this romantic moment you painted nette! As always just amazing.

Tim Smith January 16, 2017 at 2:56 PM So awe inspiring nette... Lovely

Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 1:45 PM Quite romantic and alluring is this moment in time you have penned Nette. I am swooning.....