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Rosie and Lady-Kittens and Butterflies

Kittens and Butterflies Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper ~Rosie and Lady~ MORNING A Painted Lady drinks nectar from a flower, gathering pollen to nourish other plants, a darling kitten, Rosie, seems lost full of glower, Lady floats to her, as her crimson wings expand. Gathering pollen to nourish other plants, she sees Rosie alone while shedding a few tears, Lady floats to her, as her crimson wings expand, “I am confused and lost, thanks for finding me here!” She sees Rosie alone while shedding a few tears, a darling kitten, Rosie, seems lost full of glower, “I am confused and lost, thanks for finding me here!” a Painted Lady drinks nectar from a flower. AFTERNOON Alone they wandered far beyond the horizon, Rosie smiles as she watches Lady flip and flap, they journeyed into a dark cave, very surprising, oh no, they were so scared and severely trapped! Rosie smiles as she watches Lady flip and flap, the darkness took over and left them alone, oh no, they were so scared and severely trapped! Finally sun peeked through and they went home. The darkness took over and left them alone, they journeyed into a dark cave, very surprising, finally sun peeked through and they went home, alone they wandered far beyond the horizon. ~Date Written: March 15, 2016~

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Date: 3/20/2016 10:34:00 AM
A sweet write Laura. You've written a lovely tale.
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:50:00 AM
Extra Congrats Laura. for long poem. I cannot write a long poem. Love. Anisha D
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/20/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Anisha :)-luloo
Date: 3/19/2016 9:15:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/20/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 3/19/2016 9:12:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such wonderful lines fit together to paint a tapestry of poetic beauty and joy. The images sing in the heart. This is a defininite seven and it goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/20/2016 9:41:00 AM
aw, thank you Vlad very much :)-luloo
Date: 3/19/2016 4:30:00 PM
Laura,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/17/2016 6:28:00 PM
Laura, I wanted to read this poem again because it is so sweet ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/17/2016 8:55:00 PM
I know you love cats too! Have a great night :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/17/2016 6:49:00 PM
Awww thank you Broken Wings! You are very sweet :)-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/15/2016 3:13:00 PM
Wonderful write Luloo...best wishes
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Date: 3/15/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Joseph:)-luloo
Date: 3/15/2016 2:28:00 PM
Laura, oh what a pretty poem, wonderful, and such a sweet image, I am loving this 7 ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady for all your kind words...:)-luloo

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