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Roses Are Red / Violets Are.........?

Roses are red Violets are blue Family secrets told Through your hearts spew A white wild orchid Bruised and stained with brown, Its virgin petals touched…. Emerging blooms will frown Mama lily beat purple, Her seedlings green; Siblings often wonder - Why is he so mean? As the wind carries seedlings Away from garden’s home; Lily’s tears water contused soil Her heart becomes eroded loam Roses are red Violets are blue Wounded whispers weep Longing affirmation from you ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *few thoughts on domestic violence*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2009 8:45:00 AM
Again! you expose the emotional depths of domestic abuse. Powerful, writing, Abe. Also, I wish to thank you for all your kind comments and support over the last year. Best wishes to you in the New Year. Lainie.
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:02:00 PM
Outstanding write indeed..excellent. Abe just in case i wont be online in these few days,i wanna wish you a peaceful xmas and a Happy New Year,to you and your loved ones--Charma
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:00:00 AM
that third stanza was profound, nice work...Raul
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Date: 12/18/2009 3:28:00 AM
Your heart is in the right place, my friend, our voice may only be a drop in the bucket, but we will soldier on until light has come. Keep up the good work.
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this difficult issue, Abe. Very well-written, indeed. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/17/2009 4:21:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Abe. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/17/2009 10:05:00 AM
This is beautifully written, Abe, and I hope those who need to read these words see your poem. It is always sad to think of the impact domestic violence has on spouses and children. You seem like a very gentle, loving soul whose heart is filled with compassion. Very spiritual! Much love and holiday blessings are headed your way, Carolyn
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