Rooting 8 To 5

In the middle of a dense fog night Imaginary roots were cut down by a lady Escaping from mental dungeon that dragged in despair Feeling like a bird that escaped from prison Tasting the freedom sensed when burdens are thrown For Rooting 8 To 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Fourth Place January 4, 2017 Checked with How Many Syllables Count

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2017 3:57:00 PM

Glad to see your winning poem, Nayda. Congrats for your win.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/10/2017 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2017 7:43:00 PM

Very mysterious and well written, Nayda. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/9/2017 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/9/2017 1:47:00 PM

nayda, what an interesting way to interpret the theme.. finely conveyed and quite dark too... congrats on you win and thanks for joining..huggs

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/9/2017 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Nette

Lyva Marty

Date: 1/5/2017 3:47:00 AM

I like the dark mystery here. The title of the poem is the contest name. Would you want to change this? I think this would win! Cheers!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/5/2017 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Lyva

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/4/2017 7:01:00 PM

I had an elderly lady neighbor who is gone now, who spent every day sitting in her front yard pulling weeds. She didn't have that many weeds! I think she was getting rid of the weeds of her mind. I really like your poem.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/4/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful feedback Sunlite Wanter.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2017 5:22:00 PM

Great one Nayda! Good luck in the contest.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/4/2017 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/4/2017 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.