Room With a View

Room with a View
     by Amy Swanson   12/2008

~ Written for someone dear to me ~



She sits alone
     this quiet room
            feels so empty

echoes her quiet scream.


She barely catches 
     just a glimpse
          of one lonely tree branch

it seems to mock her;


Saying, see,
     I am alone
          but I am free

and you are not.


Why did life
     turn out this way?
            Why is it so difficult

just to live?


Hot tears fall down;
      she silently prays
            that God will somehow rescue her

from this place.


The hours go by;
     days and minutes
               all turn into months

and years -


At times it seems unbearable
      where did the time go?
              Where did life go?

joys exchanged for fears


She sighs so deep
      within her spirit
               just another day -

they are all the same.


But she is resigned
      to this hollow existence
             weary silence

in this room with a view.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/25/2008 2:36:00 PM
Sad but heartfelt poem, thank you for the kind words Fritz
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Date: 12/25/2008 12:41:00 AM
This is a very sad poem which expresses true feelings some pass through...Thank you for the warm comments...tc...Sara...
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:11:00 AM
Unfortunately, Amy, I believe most people go through a period like this somewhere in life. For most it passes. May your friend be among the most. Good write. You have a Merry Christmas, y'hear. Love, daver
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Date: 12/22/2008 8:39:00 AM
Amy this is so beautiful, yet so sad. This write seemed so simple, but it pulled at my heart. A beautiful write! Blessings, your friend ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/22/2008 2:43:00 AM
What a very deeply sad write, all I can picture is barren sadness here, very well done and i love the format. Thank you Amy, so very much for your comments on my words are mine, it means alot. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/21/2008 11:27:00 PM
A beautiful, yet sad piece of poetry. Very moving! I love the way it's presented as well, like it's fragmented. Maybe to match the state of the narrator. Also thank you for your very kind comments. Merry Christmas! Nathaniel
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Date: 12/18/2008 10:58:00 PM
This is a very beautifully written and deeply moving piece. So sad that this happens in this life. Great write! Thank you for your kind words. Glad to give you a "lift". Happy Holidays! Love Robin
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Date: 12/18/2008 6:42:00 PM
Amy this is a very sad yet beautifully written poem - wonderful gift of expression that you posses - Merry Christmas and God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/18/2008 6:05:00 PM
This speaks so sadly, of lonely people I also know. Life can be cruel, while they sit and wait. So heartfelt...you said it so well. ~ Carrie
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