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Room To Breathe Section At the Gallery Thoughts

Seated, room to breathe There is shallowness present For I feel rushed If I close my eyes What if I were whisked away To rest or torment The minutes count down I still want to lose myself Let me be alone I am surrounded Those that seek tranquility Stolen by seeking

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Paul Bell

Date: 8/6/2023 6:37:00 AM

I' don't know how many times I've tried meditation just to get into a tranquil state. It just never works, my mind goes wandering and I go with it.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/6/2023 10:04:00 AM

Haha I'll consider it - I won't know whether to dial up or down the accent now :D

Christopher Grieves
Date: 8/6/2023 7:52:00 AM

Dilly - you should. Mancunian has it's presence and your voice is soft and comforting from what I have heard. Please do, otherwise we are all missing something beautiful.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/6/2023 7:30:00 AM

I'm not bad at it, not sure why I don't do it more often really - the Google balance app is surprisingly good (whilst free). I wrote a poem for meditative contest ages ago that I considered doing the audio for but not sure how soothing Mancunian is :)