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Rolling with the Rs Contest

Nette Onclaud

August 3rd, 2025

I heard tiny terrors stitched in between light walls as weightless as chicken feathers jaundiced piss, recycled adult nappies crumpled faces leaking maggots that ripen to dust here the price is right I heard

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Date: 8/3/2025 10:23:00 AM
Wow! This poem strikes hard at my emotions.
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Trina Layne
Date: 8/4/2025 8:08:00 AM
Comments appreciated, Mike!
Date: 8/3/2025 10:00:00 AM
This is certainly as raw as it gets. No finery or gaudy embellishments here. :) john
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Date: 8/4/2025 8:08:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a comment ~TL.

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