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Rondel-Devious In My Feeble Step

Devious in my feeble step... seeking some pure, fresh air and lay under a shady, tall fir with strong desire on my lip. My forehead continues to drip, not finding any soothing lair; devious in my feeble step... seeking some fresh, pure air. God! halt the desperado's grip... if he acts in fierce dispair, resorting to the wildest temper with his voice lashing like a whip! Devious in my feeble step... seeking some pure, fresh air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 4:52:00 PM
Congras Andrew on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful Rondel entry.. enjoy your honor my friend..with luv from the "Sweetheart" on vacation in Hawaii...
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Rondel". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:09:00 PM
Well penned Rondel. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/2/2010 11:58:00 AM
Great flow in verses!Celene!
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