Romeo and Juliet

The love that knows no boundary set by clan;
The clans that know no love except for war;
The flower that dares to bloom, but never can;
This then the story Shakespeare told, in core.
And what the nature of a petty feud?
Where pride replaces peaceful, prosperous life;
Where little things as mountains are construed,
And things far greater die within its strife.
How might a lesser quill have writ the tale?
One family good, the other dripping ill;
The timeless lie, the righteous must prevail;
And happiness the final act to fill.
But not these things, you had much more to say:
And that is why we think of you today.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lane Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 3:09 AM
A story of old told on his birthday. I wrote a different ending to Romeo and Juliet. I know that sounds like a travesty.
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April 26, 2025 at 12:16 PM
To me, it's not a travesty, it is a literary engineering problem. Shakespeare was building to a tragedy. I don't think one can change the ending, and keep the audience, without changing the rest of the play as well.
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