Romany Gypsy

With flashing eyes she did enthral
as to the beat of drums she danced
a wild flamingo with clacking castanets
her wide hooped skirt was all a-swirl

Golden earrings sparkling and flashing
heels looking impossibly high as she twirls
her eyes flashing enticing messages 
as the men flock to her a mocking laugh

Siren of the senses as well she knows
she taunts and teases as she grabs hold
only to push her admirer head over heels
leaving him stunned and dazed in the dirt

In a puff of smoke she vanishes from view
long rolls of drums call to her to come back
the men look in vain for her return
a soft voice enticingly calls from the shadows

Singing of long journeys to far away exotic places
of caravan wheels swishing and of horses gavotting
of smokey camp fires bristling with full cauldrons
no clue to what lies within just enticing smells

She tells of lovers she has known in distant past
entreating the men, who try their luck to no avail
she sits brushing her long raven black hair of curls
and the sparks fly giving her an ethereal appearance

The fires die low and still she has not yet chosen
it seems she is waiting for someone not now here
flashes of lightening fork across the sullen skies
and the skies open in deluges of rain and thunder

As her admirers scatter seeking shelter she laughs
spinning round and round hair flying out scattering
droplets that glisten and sparkle in pale light
at last she crumbles done to the sodden ground 

A mighty flash of lightening rends the sky in half
highlighting a jet black horse rearing up high
she runs forward laughing he is here, he has come
her gypsy king, he swings her up before him and turns

As the summer storm fades the last fork shows
the two lovers high-lit on the rolling hill
then gone, gone to their secret place of tryst
she leaves lingering memories in men's minds of what might have been

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/19/2014 8:16:00 AM
A fantasy played out in vivid imagery. I can feel the rhythem.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/20/2014 5:45:00 AM
ty Rick hugs
Date: 2/19/2014 5:17:00 AM
"Romany Gypsy" is a great poem filled with exquisite imagery. I can see this playing out in my minds eye.
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Date: 2/20/2014 5:46:00 AM
hi M.L ty very much hugs
Date: 2/18/2014 11:13:00 PM
The Impressions and Brian Hyland didn't describe a gypsy woman as well as you have here.
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Date: 2/19/2014 3:41:00 AM
wow ty so much dear Robert hugs
Date: 2/18/2014 10:13:00 PM
She is a marvelous gypsy that leaves those memories in the men's minds!! Great writing, Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/19/2014 3:42:00 AM
ty so much Andrea I highly value your review of this hugs
Date: 2/18/2014 5:28:00 PM
This is fantastic Shadow. I truly adore it..Hugs Tim
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2014 5:43:00 PM
ty very much Tim very pleased you enjoyed it hugs
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