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Romantic Rhapsody in Swishing Silk




Dark, sexy, ebony eyes that light up, sparkle and twinkle.
Tender lips, as tempting as red, sensuous, burgundy wine.


On your handsome face, not even one, creeping, aging wrinkle.
Wish I could grow all over you, like a fresh, climbing, Spring vine.


In star-dusted dreams, we ate, danced and so merrily mingled.
Till the morning’s light, found us, intertwined, in her golden sunshine!


                                      5/2/2024

Dedicated to my Mother whose birtday is May 10th, of blessed nemory!
            That is how she looked, on her wedding day!

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Cunningham Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:16 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Pangie, lovely picture too. They do live on in your happy memories. Tom
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 8:28 AM
Hi, Tom! They were extraordiary people. I cant even explain them!! You would have loved them. Most people admired them, they treated all like Kings and Queens and including others, less fortunate, Compassion was their Modus Operandi. They never asked anyone for anything, never played the oppresse, or victim game. They came here from another continent,not asking for a thing, just what could they give,that was their legacy …Edward was named after my Dad,. Oh howthey loved Elena! Dad never met Edward, my family is a mirror of their values! Pangie Romios i rescpect you so much!
Callus Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 7:22 AM
The lovely title drew me in to read, dear Pangie, and I am not disappointed. Your romantic pen and awesome dedication to a special mum deserve praise (and a fav!) Best regards // paul
Romios Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 7:45 PM
I just saw your comment, Paul, it is quite moving. My Mom was AFAV to so many people. She had the quality I have seen in Pulitzer Prize winning friends. Two attributes: giving,mixed with outstanding humility. I have seen this multiple times.to have a Mom like her, wow, a gift. Even more increble, seeing her after she passed away, where did the few wrinkes go?from where came the gold strands that mixed with gray? How did her skin glow like that? Elena stood there reading from the Torah. I stood there far from sad. Uplifted, hardly is the word I seek. Appreciatiatve of your FAV. Hugs, Pangie xx
Kaufman Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Dear Pangie poet, Your mom certainly was a beauty. I bet you favor her? Blessings to you and thanks for your recent advise, not to sweat the small stuff..
Romios Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Dear Nancy, my daughter Elena, constantly gives me that advice about small stuff.)) yes, I dont know how but Mom’s inner beauty atop of her looks, made her a standout at any gathering. I think she was far better looking than I. I felt like an prphan after she passed. Nice to see you. Pangie xx
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 12:13 PM
What a lovely tribute/write for your mother. A lovely picture of dogwood blooms in her hair. Great memories are the best kind to have. You have many wonderful ones... Have a great weekend...........
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:03 PM
I agree with you,Paula I do have many memories to share Nice communicating with you today, Pangiexx
Croft Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 11:08 PM
So Beautiful, such a nice dedication
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Hi Karen, on behalf on my Mother and I, thank you,.)) She was i’ll she is the only person I know who cried every time she heard the wedding marsh. She thought it was really pretty.. After she retired, she went back to work as the consultant in the wedding shop. she then went to each bride’s wedding that to make sure that the dresses were exactly right. It wasn’t part of her job. It was something she did from her heart,,,thank you for coming by! Hugs, Pangie xx
Jones Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:43 PM
Just love the romantic energy and sweet sensual vibes this gives! It's worthy of potd!
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:24 PM
Kare with the sensual heart, hope you are well. ..i know you pen some great love poems. I wasnt here, of course, when Mom married,,and in pictures…had flowers on each side of her face…My Dad proposed to her as she sat on the hood of a car ~at a church carnival! Now there’s a story that is bursting with ~ideas for another poem! Thank you, Karen. Pangie xx
Fowler Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Wonderful remembrance dear Pangie. Your poem is so sweet with romance and sparkle! :)
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Yes, it is, it was also a dedication. Hope all goes well with you! Blessings, Pangie xx
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May 2, 2024 at 5:40 PM
A lovely tribute to your mother Pangie. When one finds true love heaven is a place on earth… Beryl
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:42 PM
They found love, Beryl.!Both living to their eighties! They owned their own businesses, worked long hours and when I was 10 , mov ed to a large house in the suburbs. They were dreames in a good sense! I called their car, The Silver Dreamer. They w ere unafraid to thik big and live outside the box. They inspired many of my friends. All of w hom became successful in life. Including their grandaughter, Elena Eagle, who, like themm, reacches for th e stars. Love to you,Pangie Xx
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May 2, 2024 at 3:15 PM
Hello Panagiota, A lovely tribute to yo9ur mom. Hugs. /Darlene/xxxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes you had a great mother. her birthday May 19th. She semed to be a great woman. You had a great mom. a lovely tribute to your mom. Hugs. /darlene/ xxx
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Thanks Daelene, I wrote the poem first as a romance piem. Then I realize that my mother looked on this she got married.. Her birthday is soon but alas she is gone. Read my comments to Gershon.. thank you Pangie
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Classic, classy, and pure elegance. Gorgeous poem, Pangie. Romance personified. Bravo, Gershon
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, I added a foot bote sibce you replied.. my Moms birthday is may 19th, fromm her wedding pgotos, she was glowing, like Ashley Judd in the imagr, my Mom stoodin the snow for hours during the fepression with 100+0thers to get a job One opening. The night previously, he sold herself a green velvet dress. Mm got the job, from there on man, next job was at the board of trade. She was so excited when she told us about that.. SHe was quite a woman. Never a kvetcher…always looking to do mitzvahs for others, i miss her. And that kind of class.. never a kvetcher! I was blessed… She was as you say, in the poem …class plus elegance! She knew how to grow people not destroy them. One in a million.. thank you… Pangie
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May 2, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Romance personified Pangie!! Just lovely! Your love for your mum shines through! Debx
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Oh, no. Deb, i think you have my number! LOL)) Thanj you sweetie. Panggie xx
Elliott Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Oh, how beautifully tender and alive with sweet romance dear Pangie. She has dogwood blooms in her hair, so elegant. A FAV! xoxx
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Oh, golly, you sure know your flowers! She reminds me of my Mother…there isnothing like dancing with a spiffy man in tails!! I try to write with simplicity and deicacy. At times but not always. But. …also inspirational ones, humbled by the FAV, She reminds me of my Mom. Thank you Pangie xxoo
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