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Romantic Dinner

romantic dinner proposed to my valentine ~ then she choked and croaked

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:55:00 PM

Hilarious! Love it!

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:18:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I'm so glad you like it.

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/7/2021 6:36:00 PM

That one choked me up lol. Good one Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:18:00 AM

lol Mark. Thanks so much.

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/5/2021 6:23:00 AM

Heya Jenna a lot of strange things going on under your comment on my poem you left earlier, can you make it out, seems like the soups poltergeist is playing around, my name has even changed to Robert on one of them mad goings on cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 6:33:00 AM

I saw. I sent you soup mail

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2021 6:49:00 PM

Talk about killing with kindness. Hoot. Hoot.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:59:00 AM

HA...good one. Thanks, Caren.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/4/2021 6:15:00 PM

Lol!Jenna, Too funny!Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alexis.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2021 5:37:00 PM

Am reading it this way: He proposed a romantic dinner to his valentine; she choked and croaked at the mere thought... I guess they just weren't meant to be. Either that, or he's just a real 'lady-killer.' HVD, Jenna! :) gw

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:58:00 AM

My thought was...he proposed, she said yes, and then she choked on the dinner. He doesn't appear to be a lady killer in that cartoon, but I catch your joke. lol thanks. Gershon.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/4/2021 4:44:00 PM

Hi Jenna. Too funny! GL in the contest. :) Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:57:00 AM

Thanks so much, Linda.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/4/2021 2:51:00 PM

I splurted my tea when i read this gem jenna lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:56:00 AM

haha Jan, I can imagine you doing that. Thanks and hugs.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/4/2021 11:00:00 AM

That certainly has a ring to it ....Aloha! Rico

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:55:00 AM

pffttt. lol. I wonder if he took it back. LOL thanks, Rico.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2021 7:49:00 AM

... a bad day :))) - Good luck in the contest :) hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:54:00 AM

I'd say it was bad, too! lol Thanks, Anne-Lise.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/4/2021 5:41:00 AM

Ouch, no wedding now just a funeral lol. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 5:44:00 AM

Ha ha Tom. I guess she still gets the roses. Thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/4/2021 5:06:00 AM

A few taps on the back works wonders. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 5:31:00 AM

Unless he was having second thoughts. ...lol. Thank you, Victor

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/4/2021 4:31:00 AM

Haha! Loved this one, Jenna:-) It looks like a sure winner!

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 5:29:00 AM

I’m happy you appreciated my humor, Edward. Thanks!

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/4/2021 4:27:00 AM

Jenna, This is one of those, I wish I had wrote, would make a great valentines joke card, wonder was the ring hidden in the dinner, it certainly hit the spot, great one for the contest, best of luck cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2021 4:30:00 AM

Good morning, David. I'm thinking he hid the ring in that sausage she's about to eat. Let's just go with that. ha ha Thanks for enjoying my morbid humor in this one.