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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Your Smile Is My Sunshine

I place petals upon each path you tread,
so those chocolate brown eyes feel no pain.
I promise to kiss away each tear you shed,
for your smile is my sunshine in cold rain.

Silent One
13 February 2018
Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest

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Besma Riabi Dziri March 17, 2018 at 3:19 PM Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One. Silent One March 18, 2018 at 10:33 AM Thanks..

Besma Riabi Dziri March 17, 2018 at 3:16 PM Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One.

Akkina Downing March 17, 2018 at 10:57 AM I must've read this at least 10x... and still swooning over it :) Silent One March 18, 2018 at 10:33 AM Thanks Kina.. Guess this one is your favourite..

Paul Callus March 1, 2018 at 12:36 PM Indeed, this is romantic, S-1. Effortless rhyme, too. Regards // paul

Phyllis Babcock February 27, 2018 at 2:14 PM Love the first line such a nice romantic piece. love phyl

Alisa Balaieva February 25, 2018 at 10:47 AM I fall in love with this poem. Great one!

Susan Ashley February 24, 2018 at 11:21 AM Silent One, so full of protective and impassioned love and ardent devotion.. just beautiful. Swooning poetry!

Muhammad Imtiaz February 18, 2018 at 1:31 PM hi silent , your sweet words speaks a lot and break the silence............The idea of placing petals for kissing the tears is matchless .............i love your write......

Marc Acrich February 17, 2018 at 4:45 PM (:

Carole Duet February 13, 2018 at 8:29 PM This is incredibly deep and I love every line. I can't even make up my mind which line is my favorite because they all are but I guess it would be "your smile is my sunshine in cold rain". Silent One February 14, 2018 at 4:40 PM Thank you for reading all ofthem Carole..

Maria Williams February 13, 2018 at 7:14 PM I have picked my favourite and its this one over the Free Verse saving it for a read and reread. Brilliant words Si....Maria Silent One February 14, 2018 at 4:41 PM Thank you for reading all of them Maria..

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2018 at 5:44 PM so sweet, Silent One. Let me read all your examples. I do hope to try this one soon. Thanks for my placement in your last contest. Silent One February 13, 2018 at 5:46 PM Thank you Andrea, this one should be an easy one for you..

Akkina Downing February 13, 2018 at 4:58 PM I'm just drooling over this one! I love love love it :) Silent One February 13, 2018 at 4:59 PM Thank you Kina..

Jean Murray February 13, 2018 at 4:45 PM I am a sucker for rhyme. My favourite so far. Silent One February 13, 2018 at 4:59 PM Thank you Jean..

Chris Hagy February 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM Swoon!...I think wanting to take someones pain is a great testimony of true love... charming indeed :) Silent One February 13, 2018 at 4:47 PM Thank you Chris... I think this one will appeal to those with brown eyes..

Constance La France February 13, 2018 at 3:19 PM Silent, so full of love, another great example for your contest Silent One February 13, 2018 at 4:47 PM Thank you BW...

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2018 at 1:49 PM - A sweet, one ... - Love it :) Silent One February 13, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you..

Judith S February 13, 2018 at 8:06 AM Dripping with love and devotion ... a valentine verse at it's very best. Another amazing example Silent One. Silent One February 13, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thank you Judy..

Jack Ellison February 13, 2018 at 7:57 AM More please... I'm all a-tingle!!!!!! Silent One February 13, 2018 at 11:27 AM I think 4 is enough for one day my friend..

Supraja Kannan February 13, 2018 at 6:50 AM How beautiful.! Silent One February 13, 2018 at 11:27 AM Thanks..

Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 6:20 AM Another sweet poem, sure to please her! Silent One February 13, 2018 at 11:27 AM Thanks..

Arturo Michael February 13, 2018 at 5:42 AM LOvely too Silent One February 13, 2018 at 5:58 AM Thank you Arturo..