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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Metaphor For Perfection

Life is silent, until I hear your voice. You are the metaphor for perfection. Your charismatic aura enchants me, releasing emotions I cannot explain.
Silent One 13 February 2018 Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest.
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Babcock Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Can so relate to the words of this poem.love phyl
Ashley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Your first line is poetic bliss, Silent One, and your poem is so expressive of love and romantic appreciation.. A beauty!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 3:30 PM
ahh, another four liner I had failed to see. You are a charmer with the four liner charm poems!!
Duet Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 8:20 PM
The 1st line of this poem is just beau-U-ti-ful. And I love "charismatic aura". Love the whole thing in fact.
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Carole..
Teagan Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:07 PM
I think this one is my favorite. It literally swept me off my feet heh but I'm a klutz so
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Hope you didnt hurt yourself... Thanks Becca..
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:45 PM
I really like this, but I think I preferred the rhymed one more!
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Thank you.. I think many do..
Downing  Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Enchanting my dear... I love it!
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Thank you..
Murray Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:47 PM
If I have to pick, then it's second one down. Those chocolate brown.
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thank you Jean...
La France Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Silent, I love this one of all your examples for your contest, this is so magical !
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thank you BW...
Talbot Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Wow, wow, wow, wow! Your words swept me off my feet, you wondrous charmer, and how! One day, perhaps? We'll meet? Four lines of gratitude, from my heart exude! En cor my virtual friend, your words, doth hate transcend!
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Mike, nice that they charm the ladies and the men lol..
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 1:54 PM
- 4 wonderful examples, S.O. ... love all of them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thank you for reading all of the Anne Lise... I appreciate it..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 8:43 AM
This is splendid!
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 11:29 AM
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S     Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Romance personified!! Amazing S.O.
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thanks..
Ellison Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:55 AM
FABULOUS!!!! 4 lines of pure unadulterated love!!!!! I'm gleaming... Happy Jack xx
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Jack.. Nice to see you..
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Just read your all your romantic charms.Brilliantly done,you are a true romantic, they will take some beating that's for sure. Regards Tom
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Tom, this one seems like a favourite for many..
Kannan Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Beautiful...
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thanks..
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Enchanting!
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thanks..
Michael Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:48 AM
You're right...It's truly unexplainable...but knowing...
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Thanks for reading all of the Arturo, appreciate it..
Williams Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:40 AM
I've always felt that you excel in Free Verse Si, your strongest form of poetry. Another beautiful poem of yours. I love it and by far my favorite of the four....Maria
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Maria, this one took me a bit longer than the others.. Just could not get it right..
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