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Could one learn what romantic fever is? All I knew was my miserly uncle With whom we were living, Fell suddenly in love. Still he held on tight riches. Ah, but Juliana, oh wonderful Juliana, Never missing a hiccup of grace, Somehow managed to purloin from him Lovely presents that delighted Her scheming and wanton heart. But then who cared or bothered? We were all madly in love with her, Those turbid humid days. Juliana took us all to picnics Much to our youth's delight. Yes we all were in favor of our uncle, That he begot a wife, Juliana mesmerized us. For did she not make us happy, With all those gifts she gave us Behind my uncle's back? To her we were just baby dragonflies Captured in fancy colored bottles, To be indulged in and left astray, Maybe picked up some later time As if a schedule had evolved In her gracious mind. I often wondered what was best If not to tell my uncle all she spent. I had a sneaking feeling His heart was leaking fine. Would he have a heart attack And have Juliana all for us? Who could tell? He might turn us out into the barn. His heart strong and full of fortitude, Would not I be killing the golden goose? So I held my tongue. And we all suffered from hay fever As we trudged in secluded fields Frolicking in the new cut hay Or tumbling on the grass in meadows gay, That pleasant spring when My miserly uncle married away. 10 October 2021 Placed 1 ''R'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/29/2022 4:35:00 AM
She must have been a diplomatic lady and must have persuaded her miserly husband to loosen his purse strings. However, you guys had a pleasant time and you feasted on Juliana's generosity ! A lovely write that I enjoyed much, Victor !
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Date: 10/26/2021 9:49:00 AM
Love can truly change the "miserly" heart Victor. Hooray for Juliana! Hooray for the life changing power of love! Belated congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/13/2021 8:56:00 PM
Congrats and I enjoyed how well you developed these characters. I wonder what becomes of the newlyweds. Great job when you leave us wanting more.
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Date: 10/11/2021 4:13:00 AM
An enchanting story, Victor, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/9/2021 3:27:00 AM
You, Victor, are such a great story teller! Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/7/2021 5:12:00 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 2:16:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your well-deserved win, Victor. hugs
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:38:00 PM
you are a wonderful story teller Victor, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Victor - a really captivating story! Enjoyed how interestingly you presented the story in a poetic verse! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 10/7/2021 7:56:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this interesting poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/6/2021 4:57:00 PM
What a woman Juliana was, a most enjoyable read Victor. All the best for the contest… Belle
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Date: 10/6/2021 1:26:00 PM
Very intriguing poem, with love for everybody. It is verse, building toward the ending.
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Date: 10/6/2021 11:44:00 AM
You have created a captivating slice of life, Victor, with the tale of Juliana, a miserly uncle, and the children caught in the middle. An excellent work! :)
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Date: 10/6/2021 9:16:00 AM
Seen through eyes of innocence, yet astute enough to discern reality
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Date: 10/6/2021 8:27:00 AM
Victor, your writing is outstanding. How beautiful to stand on the outside and enjoy your one-of-a-kind romantic story in this fantastic write?
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Date: 10/6/2021 8:15:00 AM
Great write, Victor, Juliana was sure a playmat. Well done for a great win.
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Date: 10/6/2021 4:59:00 AM
You were all in love with Juliana. She cast a spell and made life more bearable.
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Date: 10/6/2021 4:33:00 AM
Isn't it wonderful to watch from the sidelines--enjoyed your different kind of romantic story, Victor. Impressive write, as always.
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Date: 10/6/2021 3:17:00 AM
Hi Victor, I enjoyed what you came up with using the word “ romantic”. Poor kids, they were smack dab in the middle of an unhealthy relationship. Best wishes in the contest.Well done:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/6/2021 1:38:00 AM
You don't really get to know people until you've lived with them for a while. Enjoyed your story Victor. Tom
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Date: 10/5/2021 10:48:00 PM
Love the subtle humour of this piece Victor...Delice
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