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Romantic

Could one learn what romantic fever is?
All I knew was my miserly uncle
With whom we were living,
Fell suddenly in love.
Still he held on tight riches.
 
Ah, but Juliana, oh wonderful Juliana,
Never missing a hiccup of grace,
Somehow managed to purloin from him
Lovely presents that delighted
Her scheming and wanton heart.
 
But then who cared or bothered?
We were all madly in love with her,
Those turbid humid days.
Juliana took us all to picnics
Much to our youth's delight.
Yes we all were in favor of our uncle,
That he begot a wife,
Juliana mesmerized us.
For did she not make us happy,
With all those gifts she gave us
Behind my uncle's back?
 
To her we were just baby dragonflies
Captured in fancy colored bottles,
To be indulged in and left astray,
Maybe picked up some later time
As if a schedule had evolved
In her gracious mind.
 
I often wondered what was best
If not to tell my uncle all she spent.
I had a sneaking feeling
His heart was leaking fine.
Would he have a heart attack
And have Juliana all for us?
Who could tell?
He might turn us out into the barn.
His heart strong and full of fortitude,
Would not I be killing the golden goose?
So I held my tongue.
 
And we all suffered from hay fever
As we trudged in secluded fields
Frolicking in the new cut hay
Or tumbling on the grass in meadows gay,
That pleasant spring when
My miserly uncle married away. 

10 October 2021

Placed 1

''R'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:35 AM
She must have been a diplomatic lady and must have persuaded her miserly husband to loosen his purse strings. However, you guys had a pleasant time and you feasted on Juliana's generosity ! A lovely write that I enjoyed much, Victor !
Kauffman Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Love can truly change the "miserly" heart Victor. Hooray for Juliana! Hooray for the life changing power of love! Belated congratulations on your win!
Jones Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 8:56 PM
Congrats and I enjoyed how well you developed these characters. I wonder what becomes of the newlyweds. Great job when you leave us wanting more.
Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 4:13 AM
An enchanting story, Victor, congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 3:27 AM
You, Victor, are such a great story teller! Enjoyed!
Y. Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis
Poet Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Back to say congratulations on your well-deserved win, Victor. hugs
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:38 PM
you are a wonderful story teller Victor, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Victor - a really captivating story! Enjoyed how interestingly you presented the story in a poetic verse! BW ~ Mala
La France Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this interesting poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 4:57 PM
What a woman Juliana was, a most enjoyable read Victor. All the best for the contest… Belle
Bayles Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Very intriguing poem, with love for everybody. It is verse, building toward the ending.
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:44 AM
You have created a captivating slice of life, Victor, with the tale of Juliana, a miserly uncle, and the children caught in the middle. An excellent work! :)
Seeker Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Seen through eyes of innocence, yet astute enough to discern reality
Poet Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Victor, your writing is outstanding. How beautiful to stand on the outside and enjoy your one-of-a-kind romantic story in this fantastic write?
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Great write, Victor, Juliana was sure a playmat. Well done for a great win.
Logan Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 4:59 AM
You were all in love with Juliana. She cast a spell and made life more bearable.
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 4:33 AM
Isn't it wonderful to watch from the sidelines--enjoyed your different kind of romantic story, Victor. Impressive write, as always.
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 3:17 AM
Hi Victor, I enjoyed what you came up with using the word “ romantic”. Poor kids, they were smack dab in the middle of an unhealthy relationship. Best wishes in the contest.Well done:-)Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:38 AM
You don't really get to know people until you've lived with them for a while. Enjoyed your story Victor. Tom
Skelly Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 10:48 PM
Love the subtle humour of this piece Victor...Delice
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