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Romance Under the Canopy

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                                             Under  canopy
                                     The  canopy of thick trees
                                         Just my love and me
                                 Gently he holds my warm hand
                                    Then tenderly a light kiss

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Robin Davis Date: 1/22/2014 8:57:00 PM Sara Such a passionate and loving write. The love is flowing in each line. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Princess poem. Login to Reply

Duncan Chappell Date: 10/29/2010 2:17:00 AM this is a wonderful peace here my friend like all you works i have read this morning duncan Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 10/7/2010 8:25:00 AM beautiful tanka, congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 10/7/2010 4:57:00 AM Awe this is such a sweet write Sara, congratulations on your win ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 10/7/2010 3:55:00 AM Such lovely words. many congratulations. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/6/2010 5:13:00 PM Congratulation Sis on your poem's victory in the top ten spot. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/6/2010 3:28:00 PM Congrats Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry .. a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory today my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/6/2010 2:55:00 PM Love the romantic quality of this one. (old world romance!) Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/6/2010 12:57:00 PM Many congratulations Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/6/2010 10:56:00 AM Sweet tanka. congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/6/2010 10:39:00 AM Congratulations on your win Sara in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/6/2010 5:59:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win , Sara Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 10/6/2010 4:10:00 AM congrats on your win with this sweet tanka, Sara! --nikko :) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/24/2010 2:52:00 PM Delightful and dreamy Sara, now where's this canopy. Have a lovely weekend >> James :) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/24/2010 6:01:00 AM Passion and love pours out in this beautiful Tanka....love Michael Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/23/2010 4:50:00 PM wow! the title got my attention , and the poem is full of your passion Sara, enjoyed your poem,..p.d. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/23/2010 10:46:00 AM It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/22/2010 9:45:00 PM such profoundness in one of life's simple joys, this is so special, and will touch many that read it. Harry Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2010 8:02:00 PM That is a very tender line, about a "slight kiss" It's very romantic. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/22/2010 4:49:00 PM so nice and romantic. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/22/2010 2:59:00 PM Both of the tankas you posted today are remarkable, Sara. Which will you be entering in Chris's contest? This one stays true to the standard tanka form, but carries a message similar to the other. The "canopy" makes a lovely sanctuary. Very nicely done on both tankas. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply