Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

Romance Under the Canopy

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                                             Under  canopy
                                     The  canopy of thick trees
                                         Just my love and me
                                 Gently he holds my warm hand
                                    Then tenderly a light kiss

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Robin Davis January 22, 2014 at 8:57 PM Sara Such a passionate and loving write. The love is flowing in each line. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Princess poem.

Duncan Chappell October 29, 2010 at 2:17 AM this is a wonderful peace here my friend like all you works i have read this morning duncan

Francine Roberts October 7, 2010 at 8:25 AM beautiful tanka, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels October 7, 2010 at 4:57 AM Awe this is such a sweet write Sara, congratulations on your win ;) Wilma

Tahera Mannan October 7, 2010 at 3:55 AM Such lovely words. many congratulations.

John Freeman October 6, 2010 at 5:13 PM Congratulation Sis on your poem's victory in the top ten spot. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 6, 2010 at 3:28 PM Congrats Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry .. a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory today my friend with luv..

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2010 at 2:55 PM Love the romantic quality of this one. (old world romance!) Luv, Andrea

James Fraser October 6, 2010 at 12:57 PM Many congratulations Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James

Joyce Johnson October 6, 2010 at 10:56 AM Sweet tanka. congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown October 6, 2010 at 10:39 AM Congratulations on your win Sara in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta October 6, 2010 at 5:59 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win , Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 6, 2010 at 4:10 AM congrats on your win with this sweet tanka, Sara! --nikko :)

James Fraser September 24, 2010 at 2:52 PM Delightful and dreamy Sara, now where's this canopy. Have a lovely weekend >> James :)

Michael J. Falotico September 24, 2010 at 6:01 AM Passion and love pours out in this beautiful Tanka....love Michael

Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2010 at 4:50 PM wow! the title got my attention , and the poem is full of your passion Sara, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2010 at 10:46 AM It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman September 22, 2010 at 9:45 PM such profoundness in one of life's simple joys, this is so special, and will touch many that read it. Harry

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2010 at 8:02 PM That is a very tender line, about a "slight kiss" It's very romantic. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse September 22, 2010 at 4:49 PM so nice and romantic.

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 2:59 PM Both of the tankas you posted today are remarkable, Sara. Which will you be entering in Chris's contest? This one stays true to the standard tanka form, but carries a message similar to the other. The "canopy" makes a lovely sanctuary. Very nicely done on both tankas. Love, Carolyn